Longing for You: A Time Out of Place

1. Chen Rong's restoration of the country was the wish of Chen Rong's soldiers and not Xiang Liu's. Xiang Liu did it for Hong Jiang to repay the favor of saving his life. It is true that he had feelings for Chen Rongjun during the relationship, but he did not take the restoration of the country as his own duty. 2. In his previous life, Xiang Liu knew that Xiao Yao liked him, but he was not totally ignorant. 3. The one who was assassinated by Taolin was the same eye as Chen Rong. The peach blossom mark can indeed be used as a mark of identification but it is not the main reason for the assassination. It can be seen that the author is not very old, and some of the descriptions are childish but quite cute. I sincerely offer suggestions: overall it is very good, but I hope the author can read the original work before writing some details. After all, it is a fanfic, and it will have its own plot in the later stages of development. Come on, come on [blowing kiss]

The author said that the writing was not good, but it is actually very good. Yaoliu HE would have been good, and A Nian was also written to perfection, which is very good~ A Nian and Ling Shou are also good, Ling Shou is worth it There are no gorgeous words and sentences, but it is very comfortable to read. I support the author greatly, come on💪

Actually, there is one last thing I don't understand [thinking about] rebirth? [Thinking] At the end, it seems that I am not reborn, but I seem to have memories of my previous life.

The writing style of this novel is very beautiful, every sentence is carefully crafted and every paragraph is full of emotion. The author uses various rhetorical techniques, such as metaphors, personification, symbols, etc., Making the whole novel full of poetry and artistry.

It's very good and beautiful. The author should update it carefully and don't stop updating [blowing kiss]

How should I put it? The content is very funny and some parts are quite touching. The author's writing style is quite good, but some details need to be paid attention to. And I think Xiang Liu is a bit OOC [shy] in the later stage. Overall, it is a book worth reading! ! !

It's quite interesting. I've been able to catch up to this point in one breath. The author is very grateful.

I watched it, and it was pretty good. Some of the plots made people feel uncomfortable after watching the movie.

So pretty! It's completely unconventional and unheard of. I love it and must watch it.

It's pretty [shy] It's just that Xiaoyao hasn't recovered her memory, so she can't remember what Xiang Liu did to her, which is a bit regretful [laughing]