Apocalypse! Pick Two of Six from the Start, Are You Serious?

Take a look. Already watched half of it. Well, I personally have some suggestions for the author. The protagonist's character is well developed. But the heroine. It was a failure. Otherwise I can give you five stars. My personal suggestion is that if you don't plan to improve the heroine's strength to the point where she can help the protagonist, you still can't write a heroine with a high IQ. It would be better not to take up much space. This is a post-apocalyptic survival story, not a post-apocalyptic romance story. To sum up, it's not bad. I think my comments are quite pertinent. [Laughs] Add some more. I have read some comments and found that many of them discouraged me from quitting the show because of the female lead. It can be written like this. Give an introduction to your book. The single heroine. Changed to no heroine. There is never much drama in explaining. Instead, he is just a supporting role with no role. Finally, I will add something to the book review. Post a review of the book and explain. This way there shouldn't be too many people, because the heroine was persuaded to leave. But the main thing is to make some suggestions. It is impossible to write about the heroine's help to the protagonist, since the heroine does not have much strength and her IQ is not very high. It is best to reduce the length as much as possible.

The heroine came too early and gave me less sense than the Lolita in the beginning, but except for the emotional line, everything else was well written.

The setting is quite novel, but not immersive enough. The author should not explain too much, especially outside the book. Everything should be written in the book. For example, after meeting the heroine, he will recall and explain the background. This will make it more natural and everyone can accept it. It is best to have a direct conversation and open up. In fact, it is very easy. What many people dislike is not their childhood sweethearts, but the sudden appearance of a female protagonist without any description of the heroine. The author brings in opinions. If there is no logic in describing other people's backgrounds, it is mostly brought in from the perspective of the protagonist. For example, the protagonist asks how the heroine is doing.

Author, it looks pretty good so far. I hope you will continue to maintain it and give you five-star praise [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

Very good, I recommend watching it

To be honest, although the author's gender label is male, the writing style gave me a female feeling [facepalm]. The whole novel gave me a girly feeling. Especially the description of emotional scenes is not sweet, very awkward, and very boring. I give it four points because I think the setting of the novel is good. Putting aside the emotional drama, or the description of the female characters, it is still good. The protagonist also has his own ideas, not quite the Holy Mother [laughing and crying] Please encourage the protagonist and do this next work, don't let women come in, you can't control it

It's well written. I spent a whole day browsing and found such a readable novel. I really don't know how the rating system works. Many novels that obviously have problems are still on the list, and many people give them positive reviews.

Well written, very good, keep up the good work! ! ! The plot becomes more exciting as the game goes on. Cards are drawn in a row, and various golden legends are revealed, such as the sexy spider girl, the blonde fighting girl, the deadly puppet girl, the beautiful and sassy killer girl, the magical girl, the cute red tentacle girl, etc. The protagonist uses various hot weapons and skill cards, and leads a group of beautiful and lovely card girls to kill the zombies and explore the world of the doomsday wasteland.

The front is okay, it's not an apocalyptic novel like Invincible, it's more like the real reaction of an ordinary person in the apocalypse. It's impossible to suddenly turn into a murderous maniac without killing a few chickens. The protagonist's combat power also grows gradually. Although some junk cards that can obviously be synthesized are not used immediately, is it still a minor problem? But. . . That girl who was my childhood sweetheart really arranged it too deliberately. It feels like this apocalypse is just for you, one star less. Let's see how it goes later

Yes, the cards don't have to be solved forever. Women also need powers. They can be made retrievable and sorted by cards.