I Walk the Immortal Path as a Woman

It looks good, but can you change the punctuation at the end so that it doesn't always have an exclamation mark [face covering]

It's okay. Although my parents in this life are not very good, they have been raised for 13 years. Isn't it good to go home and settle the cause and effect?

The author, the Guinness record is typing 807 letters per minute. Calculating that each Chinese character requires 6 letters, you can type about 134 words per minute. Since you are not a holder, we will calculate it as 100 words per minute. According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep time is eight hours, and you spend about two hours eating every day. Hours, and then use 20 minutes to go to the toilet, 40 minutes to wash up, one hour to exercise, two hours to find inspiration, and then strip away one hour of idle fishing time. You should have nine hours to type and type 54,000 words. Calculated based on 2,000 words per chapter, there should be 27 chapters, but you only post so much content every day. How come? To be honest, is it a deduction? The donkeys in the production team didn't dare to rest like this, so the author quickly got up to code! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] If I had known that I would only update these two chapters today, I would not have come here. I read these two chapters in vain, and my mind flew away. When I saw the news here, I felt heavy again. After all, it was the younger sister who overstepped. If the elder sister didn't change, the younger sister would have nothing to say. My sister's Kavin today really hurt my sister's heart. My heart is as cold as ice shards. It's my sister's unlucky time. I should be satisfied with the update of two chapters this day [smile][smile][smile]

It looks okay, between 7.5 And 8.5. I always thought it was from Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, but it turns out it's not [face covering]. The world view is still acceptable, and it's very interesting to watch. The female version of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, it looks really good

I have become a concubine after becoming an immortal, and even the world of immortality cannot escape.

It's okay. The logic in the early stage is quite smooth. Some comments say that the protagonist is too petty (I don't think it is petty, I just find opportunities to fight back if being calculated, and I personally can accept this). However, the protagonist is not a generous and kind-hearted person. At present, he is a type who will not actively seek trouble but will not be merciful for his purpose. What's a pity is that half of the updates were discontinued. Let's see if they will be updated later. After reading it, I found that the author has opened a new book and will probably not write this one again. It is a pity. I will read this unfinished book when there is a shortage of books in the future.

He kills people without leaving a mark, but he is not too strict. It would be better if he could learn half of Li Changshou's caution. He looks good and has food and grass +1.

No ambiguity and no CP, please give the author a big boost

It took me a long time to find this one that suits my needs!

It is the unsystematic type that I like. The author can delete the unsystematic title.