Princess! Your Consort Has Run Away Again!

The theme is good, the plot is ok I would like to give the author a suggestion. The reason for the poor data is entirely because the format is not very "tomato". For example, this paragraph: Author: After weighing it in his hands for a while, he found that it wasn't much. Couldn't he plant it easily? So he opened it and felt like the sky was falling. He thought that the seeds were as big as wheat, but now that he saw the seeds, they were so small. According to his experience, he could not plant this quantity by himself for a long time. It seemed that he really had to call on everyone. (Simple paragraph) Should be changed to: After weighing it in his hands for a while, west** found that it didn't weigh much at all. Isn't this easy to plant? So west** opened it and felt like the sky was falling! He thought that the seeds given by the county magistrate were as big as wheat. But now when I look at it, it seems so small. According to Westerners' experience, if you plant this amount by yourself, you won't be able to plant it all for a long time. It seems that you really have to call on everyone. (The characteristics of tomato novels are: paragraphs, long-windedness, be sure not to omit, add more modifications, repeat the subject and use less pronouns, such as weighing it in the hand for a while → west** weighing the seeds in the hand for a while) (The reason why this happens is because when reading novels, people read ten lines at a time and do not see very fine details. They cannot understand a long paragraph of your sentence at once, so each paragraph is a short sentence of more than a dozen words, and the names of people and objects appear repeatedly, making it easier for people to grab the information and understand the plot when skipping.) I have read 2000+ novels on Tomato. The author is very good in terms of writing and plot, but without good format, it will make people tired to read. This is the reason why your rating is low. I hope the author can work hard, read a few high-scoring books, learn a little, and adapt to the platform. There is hope for Jinfan

Yeah, yeah, yeah! Really! It was very interesting, and it made me hot to watch. This book is one of those high-laughing books that can be used to relax and unwind. Lao Deng's writing style is good and it is engaging to read. There is no messy and outrageous plot, and the subject matter is also very fresh. The protagonist is relatively new but has a sharp tongue and a soft heart. He is very humorous. This is just me! However, one drawback is that there seem to be too few people. There are only 11 people there. In order for Lao Deng to continue improving, please give more recommendations. Also, Lao Deng should be faster! ! ! When a new book is released, please @me and let me know that Laodeng has been updated again. @Cucumber's cat

The article is very good and the subject matter is very novel, but the reason for missing one star is that the emotional line is not very well written. Ps: I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 162, so I'll leave a comment. As for the main heroines, one is Lin and the other is Su. Sue obviously walks the sweet line. But Lin's line was stretched too long. Lin: From the first time when Lin went to find the male protagonist, although the male protagonist didn't know it, Lin's heart was sad. It has been like this since then. But when the male protagonist knew that he was the consort, he started to change. This is natural. But why did the author start to abuse Lin again in Chapter 162 because Lin didn't tell the truth at the beginning? This is very bad, and the reason is not valid. It was the male protagonist's fault that the female protagonist beat him. It doesn't matter if it is said in itself, but the author has to suppress the dishonesty and abuse Lin once, which is really uncomfortable. Su: There's nothing wrong with the character creation. It's going to develop over time. Ps: Why do I feel the emotional line of the male protagonist so much? The main reason is that the author writes it so well, and I feel that the writing style is very immersive. Summary: One star is missing because I personally feel that Lin's relationship should not be abused again, but that the relationship between Lin and the male protagonist should develop normally after Su was picked up by Qi. The author's article is very good and should be rated five stars. Personal feelings, after reading Chapter 162, I gave up the book, and if you don't like it, don't criticize it.

Originally, this book had a 7.9 Rating and had been on the bookshelf for a long time. Until I read the book reviews, which were full of positive reviews, they all said it was very funny. I decided to give it a try. After reading it, I thought it would be great if this book had two to three million words. It is not enough to read. It feels like reading a hundred thousand bad jokes. The main plot has a clear transition and the supporting characters are fleshed out. Especially the system is no longer a cold and mechanical way to provide supplies. The interaction with the system is also very interesting. I look forward to the author's new book.

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Overall, it's pretty good. I hate the princess Lin Shengwan, but the rest are pretty good.

It's pretty good-looking. There aren't many loopholes. If you don't look for them specifically, there are very few. Not to mention that it's inherently funny. You can't ask for a perfect replica of ancient times like Tongfu Inn, not to mention that the ancient times that modern people understand were modified by the Qing Dynasty's wild boar skins and iron pots.

It's quite good-looking. It's rare to see works that are both appetizing and can make people laugh. There are some flaws, but I personally feel that the flaws are not concealed. However, I don't have enough financial resources, so I can only support it by ordering advertising gifts [please update]

This book is really good to read, especially the description of Lu Bu fighting Sun Wukong Q for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. In addition, I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, don't show off in front of your proud brother Liang." The monkey was beaten to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like being there, and the character description is very good!

I've finished reading it all. It's very imaginative, humorous, and interesting. It's not too watery, and there are no particularly outrageous logical problems. Is it just that the writing felt a bit rushed in the later stages? Although Pig's Feet's life experience was basically guessable due to clues given in the middle, it took a whole book of digging to cover it in just one chapter. I almost buried a whole book of Haori Magic Skills, and finally I beat the boss with the magic skill + the highlight given by the magic weapon was almost interesting, a feeling of not being full but not starving to death. Overall, it is still good, it is really funny and interesting [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]