Ming Ke: Broken Zai Zai, We Need the Five Policemen to Fight Well.

It's a very novel subject. The whole article has a sense of despair (?) Sadness, the kind of despair that can only watch things getting worse and worse, but is forced to maintain the status quo, and cannot escape no matter what (if you put it into the perspective of Xiaoshu). If it is from the perspective of a bystander, then my feeling about this is: sadness without ups and downs, maintained at the same level, as if drowning in water, unable to breathe (Finally, I would like to ask, at approximately how many chapters will the remaining 4 people in the 5-person group know what happened to Xiaoshu?)

Personally, I think it's good so far. The setting is novel and allows the five-person police academy team to exist in another form, so that the relationship between them can continue.

"When the world of Conan meets science fiction elements, what kind of sparks will collide? The red protagonist has extraordinary abilities, and the five-person team helps him. Together, they uncover supernatural mysteries one after another. The CP-free setting makes the story more focused on adventure and exploration, and takes you to experience an unprecedented Conan universe!" [Note] It's really good-looking! The subject matter is very new! The main character feels quite cute, and the five-person group's scenes are enough [admiration]. The key is! The key is! This is a red square article. I can find very few Conan fan fiction books with red square protagonists without cp. This book is very interesting. If you want, you can try it. Maybe you will like this book like me [Love]

I have read a lot of stories about the police academy group, and the protagonists are all beings with limited power, and they are miserable for the sake of being miserable. But in this article, I deeply felt the delicate psychological activities and independent characters of each person in it. I really like the author's serious description of the immaturity and humiliation that our young people should have, and their powerlessness when their own abilities are insufficient. Everyone is a good person. The bond between Sakura and her friends really touched me again. Xiaoshu is a very good child. I hope World Tree can be more gentle to this kind-hearted embodiment of humanity.

The book is very interesting and the subject matter is very novel. It's a bit unsatisfying, the description of psychological activities is very admirable to me [love] [love] [love] I can't write it to a level in my life [like] [like] [like] The ending, all red characters, five friends from the police academy. The real body is a ghost, and the soul (the soul that leaves the body) is a shota. It's super cute and feels cute. The author's description technique is very delicate. The plot of Kenji-chan caring about Xiaoshu is so gentle! Especially warm! The main subject matter of this article is very novel, and it is a genre that I have never read before. I think it has great potential and I hope it won't be discontinued. Compared with other famous writers, I think his writing is above average. The male protagonist is Jing Lingyou Tongran. Xiaoshu was captured by the organization and used as an experimental subject. His body has the ability to recover, which is terrible. Because I was tortured by experiments every day, I suffered from smile depression. The protagonist Goldfinger has an out-of-body experience. When he leaves his body, he goes to the police academy to find a group of five people, and they go to the police academy together. In order to prevent the Five from pursuing the winery, he lied that he was dead. As a result, in the first chapter, Hagiwara died and became a ghost. He floated to the organization and found that the protagonist was being experimented on alive, and his mentality exploded. In the first chapter, he fell off his horse immediately, and Hagiwara was so heartbroken that he couldn't breathe. The police academy team was all alive except Hagiwara. Hagiwara died but became a ghost, and he still stayed close to Xiaozhen. It's really super interesting! It may look a bit cruel from the front, but it is absolutely guaranteed to be he. Looking forward to it! I really like [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] Huhu, keep up the good work! !

It's super, super good-looking (♥∀♥) [Blowing Kisses] [Admiration], each chapter has a lot of words, the subject matter is very new, and the protagonist Xiaoshu can leave his body. Although it's a pity that Kenji couldn't be saved, Kenji-chan will turn into a ghost and stay with Song Tiantian. It's been a long time since I've seen a book that suits my tastes so well. I prefer Yangwen. This is one of the few books that I'm willing to pursue willingly. Normally, I won't read it until the end (unless there's a book shortage). The plot is a bit cruel, but also mixed with sugar. Shujiang is super cute, and the interaction with the police academy is also very interesting. There are also some shortcomings, such as hating the yellow button (hint ing.) [Grievance]. I'm more of a fan of police academy CB, and it's really to my liking. I love Hagimatsu! ! ! Finally, I hope DaDa will continue to update. The child has been tortured by those Da DaDa who abandoned the article [almost crying]

Super super super beautiful! ! ! I really love watching this kind of dedicated protagonist, and the writing is very, very good! I boasted a lot and looked at it. The author and teacher are also super nice and answered my questions very friendly. Xiaoshu is a very good child. He will feel guilty and blame himself because his friends are implicated, but dear, the fault of all this is that damn Abyss. Xiaoshu will blame himself, which shows that Xiaoshu is a child with a high moral sense. Xiaoshu is good, Kenji comforts Xiaoshu, Kenji is good, Abyss targets Xiaoshu, Abyss is bad [I'm about to cry] For Xiaoshu, everyone is a million times more important than himself, but in everyone's eyes, Xiaoshu is also very important, but Xiaoshu hasn't realized it yet, or he has realized it but still underestimates him subconsciously. I feel that everyone will be very angry and feel sorry for Xiaoshu when they find out. I will give Xiaoshu a good beating first and then tell him that you are also very important (sorry, my description is a bit like a pastry chef). Speaking of the author, I would like to ask, will Kenji remain in a spirit state after the second year or will he be resurrected? Will Xiaojin Heihe and Jingguang become spirits? All in all, highly recommended and looking forward to updates from the author and teacher! ! [Please update]

This book is really beautiful, the logic is smooth, the characters are well grasped, each chapter is very fat, and the author is very active~ The group pet Shujiang who abuses the body but not the mind is the perfect match for my xp! I really like the group pet that was damaged in the battle. The ignorant little ghost is really cute (๑Ő௰Ő๑) (Shujiang is already a world tree, can he really not be more stupid? When I was reading the article, I saw that Xiaoshu had the attribute of [immortality], and I could guess that Xiaoshu must be in great pain. After all, this is almost eternal life, and eternal life is the most frightening thing in the world. Watching my most important friends leave one by one... (You can turn into a ghost, is it really a HE ending?) I'm really looking forward to the expressions of the five members of the group later on when they find out that Xiao Shu is still alive and were forced to undergo many inhumane experiments on the human body. The expressions of powerlessness, anger, and pain, especially the expressions of Zero and Jingguang when they find out about Xiao Shu's situation... It must be exciting~✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧ How exciting! (The only shortcoming of this article: There is currently a little bit less food, and there is not enough food. Please put in more food! (இωஇ)

This is an article for group pets with good senses! The protagonist is very cute, but he is also a miserable child, which really poked me xp(○｀ε´○) I feel that Jingwu and other characters are not OOC. Everyone has their own reasonable stance and analyzed many points of view that have not been mentioned in other works. Although Xiaoshu has a golden finger in a sense, he is also reasonably restricted. Although he is happy with the article, he is not completely happy (?). Instead, he is bullied because of his special ability. It really makes my heart beat (x) (really not a perverted statement) Because the timeline of Police Five and Red is relatively early, it has completed many things that were not mentioned in the main work, such as how everyone grows and transforms (it's good to be young). The bond between them and the little tree is also quite cute! Should I say this about Teacher Fox's writing style (?)? Personally, I feel it's very Japanese, and I always feel like I'm watching another episode (fun) This is really my favorite Conan fanfic in recent times, and it's good news to the whole world! Teacher Fox, how can I live without your updates (loudly

It's really beautiful! ! I like Little Tree very much. It is the second book on Tomato that I think is particularly good. I hope the author will do more and never abandon the article! ! Every chapter at the beginning made me cry, but I also felt that this article was like a person walking on a road full of thorns. The place where the thorns stung me was very painful, and it bled and turned into pus. But in front of me was the rising sun, so I turned my back to the dark abyss and walked firmly towards the light. Finally, I walked under the sunshine and saw the liveliness of birds singing and the fragrance of flowers. ——I feel like the author likes to read like Xiaoshu, which is a bit fun.

Already tied, it looks good, but now it's a little boxy. Do you have any clues, author? (◍•ᴗ•◍) It's really good-looking, very good-looking, what kind of deadly bond... Both the police officer and the protagonist should be fine The author must let Hiro's death be wiped out by butterflies. Don't make me kneel down and beg you... The teacher writes well. I feel sorry for Xiaoshu. I must praise the author. The descriptions of various situations and the psychology of the characters are very good. It can be said to be quite outstanding among Mingke fans. Although I came here for Police 5, I really like the protagonist. The protagonist is like a little angel. The author's writing is so rigorous. It's hard work writing the article. Author, you must keep writing! Come on!

It's a good read. The subject matter is very similar to JJ's "Alien Ghost". They both used the identity of a ghost to contact the police academy team, and then found out that they were imprisoned experimental subjects. In the end, everyone rescued the protagonist from the winery. I highly recommend it. The author's writing style is pretty good, very fluent and not slobbery. Those who like beauty, strength and misery will probably like it, but the protagonist of this book is not that strong? The setting is still strong, it is the world tree, but after all, it is weak. It is self-destructive and does not realize it. It is a bit of a happy puppy who doesn't take itself seriously, right? (Haha, this is very similar to JJ's book.) It's one of the few books that I consider to be on Tomato's must-eat list. It's a pity that it's discontinued.

The author's psychological description is really delicate. Everyone's psychology will change according to their personality, state, and how much they know. It is very consistent with the psychology of normal people [Adoration] Moreover, the story is told very clearly, and the relationships, camps, and status of various characters are well controlled, without any ambiguity. Although the author seems not confident and has to explain it again later, everyone who reads seriously can understand it clearly~ All in all, it's very good, and the emotional and psychological descriptions are really top-notch. It is very friendly to people who like Police Five, and it touches their hearts [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] Please update [crying] [crying] [crying] If you don't update, the child will starve to death.

The inner drama written by my wife is really great. Xiaoshu is immersed in the black mud and cannot get out. He swallows the bitterness in front of his friends and shows his gentle and sunny side to his friends. There is also the explosion of guilt and negative emotions when the five people face Xiaoshu and gradually discover the truth. They comfort each other, encourage each other and help each other move forward. The feeling of extreme pulling, my God, I fell straight into the pit. In particular, Madam will write another line that has not been taken in the main plot as a side story, which is equivalent to another development of the parallel world. I really like it!!!! I really like the pull of the inner drama of the characters in Madam's works. I really like it! I look forward to Madam's updates, and I also wish Madam's works to become popular (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

A very memorable book. The plot is coherent, and although there are many personal settings, they are basically well polished, so they don't seem obtrusive. From my personal experience, it's rare to see a fanfic that doesn't feature Conan at all, but it didn't make me unable to read it. It was a very novel experience. The emotions are delicate, and it can be seen that the author is trying hard to figure out the psychology of each character and the reactions they will have in certain situations. The characters are basically stable and not collapsed. The fly in the ointment is also here. In the middle period, some of the protagonists' internal conflicts are described in too much detail. It can be seen that the number of words is not enough, but it makes me feel a little stuck after reading it. This blockage is not due to negative emotions brought out by exhaustive internal friction. Maybe it's because I'm more looking forward to seeing the strong side of people, but the author's writing tends to describe their fragility? These guys are so pitiful and have worked so hard. Fortunately, it's HE in the end, and it's all over!

Very good to say...[Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript] I am planning to write a fanfic but I haven't thought about how to arrange the timeline... Emm Let's talk about it~Fuxu is so awesome ദ്ദി ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́ )✧[Send heart][Send heart]

It's really good to read. Xiaoshu is a very good child. Huhu's writing is super good and every chapter makes me want to pay for it! I really look forward to Xiaoshu being rescued later, I want to see the end!

It feels both sadistic and healing... Although Xiaoshu is very, very, very distressed, the sincere relationship between him and Police Five is so heart-warming! Hold high the banner of abusing the body but not the mind! And the author greatly guarantees that it is he! ! ! I can only say that the author understands very well what I want to see, the knife police at five o'clock, and the pain in their hearts... Ah... I admit it! I feel so good... Cough cough cough cough cough Looking forward to the end~ Then quickly update the daily life after the rescue~ (Super loud!) Daily redemption after abuse, Xiaoshu's PTSD, Police Five's heartache and gentle comfort... Ah... The author is great! You know! I understand more and more that some readers have the urge to lock up the author and code words (whisper) ps: I will omit the 10,000-word short essay praising the author below~

Shujiang is really super cute. I've been following up on updates from the time I wrote the article until now! The content and plot are very interesting and the setting is also very fresh The author Da DaDa (Hu Hu) is really friendly and often interacts with us in the comment area. Hu Hu is really hardworking and occasionally even code-codes messages back to us at two or three o'clock in the morning. P. S. The author is very obedient! Real! The protagonist Xiaoshu is the cub of Lingling and Hiro. He is an experimental subject of the organization. He has a setting that does not grow up (because he was tortured) and is functionally compatible with Noah. He also kicked Hiroki's lunch (emphasis!!!) The beginning is from the perspective of hagi's soul after death (but it will become the spirit behind Song Tiantian! It's sweet!) It's also very interesting. Say it again! It's sweet! Sweet! Believe me! This is a rare and good new article by Ke

That's great. I have never given stars or reviews to any book. This book is so in line with my hobby that the author must write it down. I really like this heartbreaking feeling. The lovely tone and the beautiful emotions between close friends make this book not so sad. But this book perfectly describes the overflowing painful feeling in my heart, which is numb on the one hand and desperate discovery on the other. This kind of unequal and even caring description is so cool. Especially the painful struggle of Xiaoshu's body and the stomachache caused by his friend's emotions affecting his body. He discovered that every little bit of his daily life was wrong, and then he opened it up and saw the rot inside, which caused severe pain. Sometimes I would conceive some plots in my mind that suit my hobby, and I don't know how to express the extreme of this emotion. But today, I realized it, it's so delicious! There is another party who rushes to the other party without hesitation, while the other party is still hesitating in place. This hesitation is caused by the despair day after day. It is all for the good of the other party and is sincere, but their thoughts are entangled with each other and they cannot let go of their worries to communicate. I just like it. It's all right, but it's all wrong. This is so cool. It's so cool. To be honest, every point in this book stepped on my xp. Friendship and pain coexisted, and I was greatly disappointed. Big cheers for the author! Keep your own style!

It's super invincible and beautiful. The performance of Xiao Shu being tortured but still unwilling to show it in front of his friends is super heart-wrenching. Everyone's efforts to save Xiao Shu are also very touching. The two parties' two-way rush moved me. There are so many psychological activities that I can fully relate to their emotional changes. It makes me heartbroken. The most regrettable thing is that it is too short and not enough to watch. The author must work hard to update [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

Although this book has relatively few chapters, it is a new book with great potential! ! I have also read a lot of articles about the Five in the Police Academy, and this one fits my requirements perfectly! ! ! The best thing is that someone saw Xiaoshu being tortured. Although it is a bit perverted →_→, I really want to see everyone feeling sorry for him π_π! ! ! Highly recommended, highly recommended, highly recommended! ! ! Everyone comes to see

It's beautiful, the little tree is cute, and the Hagiwara ghost is fun. It is also rare for an author to write about Brother Gao Ming, who has flesh and blood. There will be a vulnerable side, the writing is very graphic, and the plot transitions well.

The theme of this article is novel. Although there are private settings, the story line is clear, pitfalls will be filled, and the characters have distinct personalities. The five-person police academy team is friends, there is no magic change, and the ending is he, all in the red camp. Xiaoshu, who became an experimental subject, had a novel golden finger - his soul left his body and returned to his friends in the state of his soul. This became his only comfort when he suffered from the painful experiments every day. It vividly describes Xiaoshu's psychological game of not wanting his friends to be involved in danger. But at the same time, there is also a group of righteous police friends who are worried about him and work hard to save him. They are all trying their best to save each other in their own way (people with too high moral bottom line tend to blame themselves). The author's writing is very good, but the biggest regret is that we are outsiders in the book. We have a feeling of powerlessness that cannot be slapped into the screen (I really want to slap those experimenters and organization members). The last author's daily update! ! !

I like this book very much. Overall it is good. Xiaoshu is a very good and gentle child. The background is slightly dark, but the big promise is he! It may be a little cruel, but it must have a good ending. First, let me talk about the advantages of this book: 1. The characters are vivid and the psychological portrayal is very delicate. 2. The plot is reasonable and the background is clearly explained. 3. I personally think that the original character image has not collapsed. 4. Fluent language. 5. The author is a very good person. If you have any questions, you can ask them in the comment area. I will reply as soon as I see them. (I will add a comment later if I think of it) It may cause discomfort... It doesn't seem to be available for the time being, but it has been briefly introduced. Then mark another fragment that can reflect the character of Xiaoshu I summarized above: He showed a bright and unblemished smile to Hagiwara, and said in the cheerful voice that Hagiwara remembered: "Let's go give Jinpei-kun a surprise." This was obviously the image of a small tree in Hagiwara's previous impression. Although I could only hear the child's voice but not see his face in the past, I could always imagine that the soul that made such a voice must have a bright smile. He must be a lively and energetic child. Although he is Zero and Hiro's tame child and should be about the same age as them, everyone only regards him as an innocent and childish child. Sometimes he will be very clingy, and he will hug people and act like a baby. Sometimes he will pretend to be a little adult, but he will imitate the gruff speech of adults and make people smile. It should be like that. But when I could see his true appearance, I found that it was indeed a childish face. He tried his best to show a energetic smile, but the face was thin, full of stitch marks, and missing his right eye. Hagiwara clenched his fist tightly. But really, he shouldn't be misled by this clip. I'm not lying. I'm seeking truth from facts.

It's super beautiful. It warms my heart like a little sun. The body becomes hot. I rarely comment on books, but this one really made my heart go up. I am really super careful and will explain every setting. I really like it [love][laughing][admiration][please update]

The author writes very well (wiping away tears). From the first chapter, he has been stabbed. He has been stabbed in every chapter. By the latest chapter, he has been stabbed. Xiaoshu is the most miserable protagonist among the tissue experiment subjects I have ever seen. He is extremely beautiful and miserable. I hope Xiaoshu can disconnect his body senses this time when he faints, so that he can suffer less pain.

This book is one of the "sweetest" Mingke fanfics I have ever read. The little sun-type protagonist makes people feel healed. Although he is in darkness (that is, as an experimental subject), he also longs for the dawn of dawn (that is, the warmth of his partners, or the elusive redemption). The mutual redemption between the protagonist and his partners (the protagonist gives the partners spiritual strength, and the partners try their best to save the protagonist.) Makes people feel ripples in their hearts. It is really touching. Birds with broken wings yearn for the beautiful sky, no matter how sad they are, they don't say anything, they just sing a moving melody to let their partners in the sky not be sad; birds in flight are willing to stay for their companions, no matter how hard the other party hides it, they understand its sadness, and they are willing to fall from the sky and fly with their companions.

The plot and character settings are very good, and the details are also written very carefully. The character traits and descriptions are also very good. Overall, it is good. The author must continue writing.

٩(♡㉨♡ )۶ The setting is very good, the emotional development of the characters is very delicate and smooth, the protagonist and the author are also very cute (ღ˘⌣˘ღ) I love you all so much ( ˃̶̤́ ꒳ ˂̶̤̀ )