Tomb Raiding Begins at the Summit of the Clouds

I will write the first book review myself [laughing] Because this is the first time for the author to write a book and he has to go to work, so it is very difficult to post more. If there is something unreasonable, you can give me some suggestions, as well as the plot. If it is suitable, I will add it [laughs] [laughing crookedly] Finally, I don't know if I can write about fighting against my little life in the article [laughing crookedly], so if you know about this, you can give me some valuable suggestions [sending my heart]

Yes, come on, it's good to follow the route of the meteorite. There is no need for CP or anything like that. Just clear up the logic, bury the pits, and discover the truth of the world.

It is indeed a tomb robbing novel, but it is not a fan novel, but there are many similarities. For example, there are nine gates but not nine gates that steal pens. The main plot seems to be exploring the existence of gods or a history that did not exist in ancient times. There are gods in that history. It seems a little bit brain-burning. Except that the author likes water and the word count is small, there are no other poisonous points. Of course, those who like to watch Bottle of Evil and Black Flowers can leave, because there is no such thing here. 'My dear author, I would like to make some suggestions. Since the protagonist is a time traveler and can also travel through meteorites in this world, has the protagonist ever thought that he was brought here deliberately by God, and the abilities given by the system are also controlled by God? The above are my suggestions, you can take them or not.

The author seems to have come back after a break. To be honest, you can tell that the previous ones are very simple, but the later ones are good. The chapters that have been revised so far are all good. It depends on the quality of the follow-up. Please support it with 4 stars first [laughs] I read it over and over again, and it took me a long time to understand some parts [laughing awkwardly] It can be called an IQ tester, no wonder it is not popular. I hope that when I come back and rewrite it, I can notice this problem and take care of me who is not very intelligent [face covering] and give me some explanation

Some say that this world view is really huge and a bit of a test of my brain power. Sometimes I may have to watch it twice before I can react. Those who like fast-paced and cool writing say you are not happy. This is an adventure story, with one mystery after another. What does it mean to slowly understand it bit by bit?

In line with my way, come on!

The content is clear, the sentences are fluent, and the plot is coherent, but the content is a bit lacking.

It's good, but it takes a lot of brainpower

The world view of the game is quite big, but it is not the same as before. Not so many people are willing to first see the general direction of the world, and then get into the main story little by little.

Thank you to the author for writing it, it's very interesting. Come on.