Dreams Begin in The Legend of the Condor Heroes: Shadow Reversal

This is one of the few fanfiction novels that doesn't portray Wanyan Kang as Yang Kang. Wouldn't it be better to divide the world into three kingdoms and prevent the Mongols from unifying it? It could even reduce casualties significantly (Mongol massacres are no joke).

The book is good, but it uses a lot of first-person narration, followed by third-person narration. Avoid using "he" at the beginning of each sentence when referring to the third person; using the name is better. After that, you can use "he," and following common usage, you can refer to yourself as "this prince" or "this crown prince," but avoid using "I." Everything else is fine.

It's so beautiful! 🤭 The story is very engaging, and I'm really looking forward to what happens next.

It's alright, keep it up, author!

The writing is fluent, the plot is tight, and it's good to see how Yang Kang changes his fate.

It's so good, why isn't it updating anymore? 😢😢😢 Keep it up, author!

Forget about formalities and refinement, focus on the plot! Good luck, author!

It's great, it made up for my regret. I've been looking for fanfiction about the Kang-Ci relationship, but it's not harem, it's just about Huang Rong.

Looks good, when will the Song Dynasty be destroyed? 🤔🤔