Premier League Penalty Box: My European Journey

I read more than a dozen chapters and played two games. How should I put it? It's not poisonous, but the taste is a bit bland. The characters are not vivid, the competition is not passionate, and the rural people cannot see the "happiness of football". The communication between classmates and villagers is to talk in a formal manner according to the characters, and then there are long descriptions of the competition without passion and rhythm, which seems a bit watery. The writing is smooth and there are not many bad sentences or typos, but this should be the basic requirement for writing, right? I hope the author will continue to work hard and think about how to embody the excitement of online articles and how to interpret the passion of sports competitions. I don't watch many sports competitions, so I suggest you read Lin Hai Tingtao's football novels to learn from them.