Football: Starting with Barcelona's Rejection

Dear brothers and sisters, if you think it's good, please give it a good review. It will motivate me to keep writing! 😂

It's good. I've been following along. Keep writing, and whatever you do, don't get into the "national team" (a highly competitive writing group). If you do, I'll stop following. Don't fall into the trap! Many of these are excellent, but once you get into the "national team," your career will plummet. After reading so many novels like this, please don't do anything rash and jump off a cliff!

It's really good, author! Keep it up! I hope you'll let the protagonist join Liverpool. Tomato Novels rarely feature characters joining Liverpool. Author, keep it up! [Bookmarked] 💕🥰

The protagonist gets shoved by his teammates and they immediately attack without giving him any cards—that's toxic!

Go go go!

It's not bad now, hopefully there won't be too many problems in the future.

It looks good now, hopefully it will continue.

Well written, I hope the author continues to do so 💕

It's not bad, but there aren't enough characters. He's already 100 goals and still can't score a solo goal. And he's always the one feeding him the assists. If you're going to do something, do be the one who gets the assists.

It's alright, but there are some errors, such as the mention of Cristiano Ronaldo being older in 1213. Hopefully, the author will correct them.