Esports: After Retiring, I Started an Online Romance with a Big Shot

The plot is quite good, but it needs to be scratched a little. The punctuation and wording in a few chapters are a bit problematic, which affects the viewing. The settings of the two male protagonists are quite good. It was towards the end when Gong said that he and his teammates were thinking of retiring, which looked a little sad. That is to say, in the end, they can only be teammates for one or two years. Although it is very realistic, it also feels a bit difficult to accept.

It needs to be improved. There are not many good female characters in it. They feel silly and love to cause trouble. Because it is watched by female viewers, it will turn away many readers. It cannot be said that girls in dual male protagonists must be villains. What impressed me the most was that there was a meatball in it and she said something normal. And the content, not to mention whether it was a cool novel or not, was just very frustrating to watch. Fortunately, the male protagonist opened his mouth and the ending was okay.

What's good to watch is that Yan Jin's past five years were too hard... When the misunderstanding was resolved, the writing was okay, but it's still a pity, five years, the best five years... And the outside world doesn't know about their bond, so I feel it's a pity. I really want to see netizens cry after their story is exposed, it must be interesting~ But it's acceptable to end it like this. After all, I wanted to give up several times in the middle, so it's just right to end it so quickly. The double c extra is good to watch (✪ω✪) and also very annoying (✪ω✪) Shi Feng and Song Aiyu were also easy to laugh at, but there were too few and I didn't see enough! One star is deducted simply because the female supporting role was not ruthless enough to be removed from the production line. After five years, she has been so advantaged. The outside world does not know that Yan Jin and the others feel uncomfortable because she missed five years. It is a pity.

Good-looking, with super positive views! Our Jinjin is really a poor baby, but his moon illuminates him, and they will be together happily forever! I wish all CPs happiness forever! Come on (actually I feel a little shortcoming is that I don't have a specific imagination of Jin's appearance, but Duan is a lot of the appearance that is described, I feel that the writing is a bit biased, I'm sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, just my personal opinion, if you mind, I can delete it QAQ)

It's a very good novel. It was a bit rough in the early stages. I felt really wronged. I really wanted to hug my little assistant. After all the hardships, I will be happy in the future! ! ! Sweet and sadistic style, memories kill~, the plot has twists and turns, the emotions are more intense, it is too much for one person to bear, but fortunately it goes in both directions!

I spent a morning reading this book. Let me summarize it. In this book, the emotional scenes of the two male protagonists are very direct, there won't be a lot of procrastination, everything is there, and it is well organized, and the top and bottom can be connected. There will be no male protagonist Shen'an. He is from a wealthy family, but there will not be some not so good plots like those written by wealthy presidents. They are all written around the plot of the two male protagonists, and misunderstandings are resolved quickly. After all, after 5 years, there are two pairs of deputy CPs. The plot of the first pair of sub-CPs has been finished, and the second pair of sub-CPs seems to have not been completely finished by the author. CP is very good, but the only drawback is that the plot seems to be missing a bit. There could be more extras, which may be a little tiring for the author, but there is no way. It is very interesting to write, because this is an e-sports article with a lot of content about e-sports. What should I say? I just feel that there is a bit too much, or too much, and I feel like it, but this book is worth reading. I hope the author will continue to work hard! [Adoration][Admiration][laughing][laughing]

They are two very cute people, their emotions are very smooth, and their memories are intertwined well. The only flaw is Shen Yanjin's self-narration in the early stage, which means that the inner feelings are too exposed. This should be due to the bias in the use of words and language expression. In comparison, Duan Mingyue's inner activities in the later period are very good, just right, the image is substantial, full and vivid. Love that goes both ways is the most beautiful. They are good. (Of course, twisted love, I love it😍) As for Miss Lu, well, people are always sad... From chasing dreams to being corrupted by greed, people inevitably change from shining to being twisted, dark and extreme. Therefore, losing my true heart is the scariest thing, because I am no longer me.

Duan Mingyue [Love] Shen Yanjin is so sweet, Mingyue's IQ is very online, Xiao Yanjin is also very cute and shy, in short he is very, very good-looking [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

This book is really a treasure among Tomato's two male protagonists! ! ! ! ! The writing is very good and not awkward, and the ending is very different from the endings of ordinary e-sports novels. Shou is not made cute, and Gong is very considerate and considers Shou's feelings. This is also the first time I have seen an e-sports article about retiring at the beginning. I really don't lose money by investing in it. I highly recommend it! ! !

Except that the ending is a bit rushed, the character description, psychology, details, foreshadowing, etc. Are all done well. When I saw some misunderstandings between Duan Mingyue and Yingold, it was really a bit heart-wrenching. This also shows that this book is good. If possible, I hope to publish more books. I like it.