Reborn: Becoming the Canary in Your Heart

Personal opinion: When writing, don't treat it too much like the protagonist, but add other people's plots into it appropriately, so that it reads like a story! 👻If it's a bland story about the two protagonists, it won't be very fresh to read... Please don't comment if you don't like it [laughing] I am also very happy to be the first reviewer of this book! [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

After looking at it for a while, I felt very frustrated. I can only say that the two of them loved each other very much. After Shou was reborn, he was really in love. His favorite creation was not even one ten thousandth as good as Gong. Before Shou was reborn, he was self-reliant and used the copyright fees of two songs to offset Gong. After spending the money, he became Gong's canary after rebirth. Whenever he encounters any problem, he waits for Gong to solve it. When he sees Gong, he cries and hugs him. The problem is that every time Gong solves the problem, it is not painful. Maybe this is something that CEOs in real life think more about? Others were embarrassed in front of him, so he just said it was too late and dragged him away? ? ? That's it? In fact, if something like this happens in reality, it would be the best solution to leave as soon as possible. But the problem is that this is a novel, Gong is a big CEO, and it just goes away? PS: Maybe I've only read cool novels before, and I've never seen anything like this. After all, I think reading novels is just to relax my mind, rather than to think about the world of people in real life after reading it.

This book is really beautiful. Baby Yanyan is so well-behaved [Adored][Admired] I almost wanted to steal it home [Admired] Yanyan is delicate but not feminine. Yan He really knows how to pamper the baby, and the author's writing style is very good. The article really satisfies my little hobby of reading literature, "I am willing to be imprisoned", super recommended! ! ! ! The article is just right, neither too long nor too short, but the extras are a bit short [crying] [crying] [crying] It's not enough to read [crying] [crying]

The stars in the sky give you gifts, but the stars in the sky are not as good as you. The more you are a stranger in the world, the more unavailable you are.

The sweet story between the two protagonists is indeed quite sweet. I always feel that Shou is a bit squeamish. Children who grew up in his kind of family should not be like this. Moreover, Gong's possessiveness is outrageous. He knows that this is wrong, but he still does it. I feel that I don't love Shou that deeply. Shou always calls himself my little darling, which feels a bit embarrassing, especially in front of many people.

Lin Yan is a sweet-tempered and arrogant little cute [shy], Wen He loves to pamper his little baby [blowing kisses], and Lin Yan is very easy to coax when he is angry [pouts] [pouts] [laughing] [laughing], Wen He is also very good at coaxing his little darlings [admiration] [admiration] [admiration]!

I think it's very beautiful! This article is so sweet! What was a prison at the beginning turned into a love prison in the later stage. The possessiveness that imprisoned him slowly let go of his possessiveness, allowing his little baby to shine on the stage of his dreams. (But I still get jealous, haha!) Shou Dui Gong also likes Dui Gong very much after his rebirth, and he recognizes his own liking for Dui Gong. The two of them began to fall deeply in love with each other. Their interactive sessions are very sweet, I think. Overall, I think it's a very good article. [Send heart][Blow a kiss][Shy]

I feel the writing is very good, but I just want to know the story of Lin Jiao. I feel like he has been reborn.

Except for being a little embarrassed about calling me baby all the time, everything else is fine.

There are still some shortcomings, but overall it is still very beautiful.