This Is Ridiculous! They Insist on Making Me Their Simp!

There should be fewer scenes in the old house. Don't use the old house to threaten the protagonist as an individual. Unless you say that the protagonist's father is not dead, and use his father to threaten, then there is no problem. Using a house to threaten the protagonist all the time is not enough, or you can say that giving them millions or millions of money to move the protagonist with "sincerity" is better. The other ones are really poisonous. Shen Lian's arrogant brain-filling monster is a bit over-the-top, but it doesn't seem particularly annoying at the moment. It's a good control. The other characters are okay and not too bad. The description of how the characters get along is not bad, and the portrayal is also quite good. My evaluation is to try hard to catch up with the star who ran away in June. There is hope. The book should not be lower than 8 points in the end. If the characters are well developed, it will be easy to get a 9 points. Come on.

So what role does Kangya play in this? You are a very beautiful little boy and girl, and you are a little girl who is more beautiful than the heroine. How strange.

Is Kang Ya really a tomboy? I saw it and it was really sad.

It's very good so far, but sometimes the dialogue between the male and female protagonists is a bit awkward😳 In some places, I feel that the male protagonist's reaction is very strange. When Dad Chen asked the male protagonist why he stopped cultivating, the male protagonist should have told his daughter what he had done instead of denying it. He should have blamed the other party for not explaining the situation clearly, and I think he was used by his daughter. There is nothing unavoidable about the knife on the neck and the kiss between him and his daughter. Normal people would think that way. The most important thing is that the dialogue between the male protagonist and the customer is very awkward. It feels like it is fake at first glance. It is a bit excessive, but the dialogue with other characters is normal.

It's pretty good, but it's a bit disgusting that his yandere father raised the price of that old house to prevent others from auctioning it, but everything else is fine.

Beautiful, very novel

Looking forward to Kang Ya's next plot [laughing]

As for whether Kang Ya is a boy or not, I'm afraid that it will end up in Nantong for me to see.

I haven't read much yet but the content is quite interesting. Five stars to encourage the author💪

Needless to say, why do we have to collect a certain number of words to publish a book review?