You Removed My Name from the Family Tree. Why Are You Panicking Now That I’ve Changed My Surname?

It's still watchable, but it's draggy, and Revenge isn't dense enough. Grandpa Jindan who appeared was a little failure. I would like to give you some advice. Generally, the chapters of this type of regret article should be put together in the early stage. Otherwise, there will be no interesting points or the interesting points will be too sparse. They are all about revenge and torture of the betrayed, not the torture. It is recommended to increase the number of updated chapters to 5 per day, so as to speed up the rhythm of the plot. Or there should be less foreshadowing, such as the rhythm of cultivation or the rhythm of attracting hatred for new characters, which should be appropriately reduced. The newly updated scene of going to the accountant to get the spirit stone is too procrastinating and could be shortened. It could just highlight the lack of recognition of the ancestral tablet and the refusal to give the spirit stone. However, you used too many words, which gave the impression that it was just talking. So be it. I hope you can write better and better, and more and more people will read it. This type of book is also a hot topic at the moment. If you want to make money, you have to create data first, right?

It's so beautiful that I'll be haunted by it [you taste it carefully]

It's okay, I've seen so many revenge protagonists, but the protagonist of this one at least has a supporter [face covering]

Okay, but I don't regret it thoroughly enough. I want to see the blood flow like a river! ! ! [Angry][angry][angry]

The writing is generous, and it's a slap in the face [eating melon] It's very good, come on, come on