On Her Wedding Day, a Psychotic Tycoon Showed Up to Steal the Bride

I have watched many double-male protagonists, but this one is the only one with a unique story structure and a plot that is not abusive. Very good, I like it very much! It is recommended to read Shui Qiancheng's works, which will give you a lot of inspiration for the ups and downs of the storyline!

Four stars for Fu. Did Shen Buyu evaluate the egoist character?

I can't speak but it's really good-looking. I'm looking forward to the following plot [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Overall, I like it... But I always feel a little strange about Shen. I feel that several of his characters are slightly inconsistent (... Just my first impression when reading), and I can't find any of his charms that are worthy of being "so" liked by so many people. I'm kind of looking forward to my brother's emotional line [shy]

Twenty-two-year-old Shen Yian was wrongly accused and imprisoned. When he was bullied in prison, he mistakenly entered the territory of the prison known as the "mad dog", and the legendary ruthless big shot saved him from others. In order to avoid being beaten by others, the poor Shen Yian went to the territory of the "mad dog" every day during his breaks in prison, and the big boss also acquiesced to his existence. During a lunch break, the big boss asked Shen Yian to read English, and Shen Yian did it. Little did he know that this move made Yue Lao tie him up with the legendary big boss, and they would entangle him until death. Once the golden wind and jade dew meet, they will win over countless others in the world. (Sisters who like to watch forced love with the ending he, read this book, you won't lose money!!)

I mainly like the author's beginning, but I feel that the author needs to improve on the later plot. Mainly because of the author, the emotional description can be a little deeper. For example, when Gong finds the gift and the note given to him, I heard you write more detailed or even exaggerated. For example, you can make Gong cry. You can also be more detailed in the psychological description. Because at that time, he should be the kind of person who saw his love with his own eyes and responded to him. After all, people can't get it even if they love it, and they only get it now. He cried with joy and a kind of sadness because he had lost his lover. For example, he can feel a sense of despair when he learns that Gong is right about many things around him. Although it is too exaggerated, human nature will have a fear when someone controls everything about you. Although you know that this person is not a good person in the sense of the word, when you see it with your own eyes, you will definitely feel a chill in your heart, so that you can more pave the way for him to escape, and you can be more detailed, and you can write about the conversion of feelings.

The story direction is great and the structure is very clear. The protagonist doesn't procrastinate. It's just that the writing style is a bit immature, the characters are not vivid and dull, the personalities and behaviors are a bit too single and unclear, and the character design is a bit childish. It is not just about pursuing big business wars, but it is a bit lacking in this aspect, and even a bit inconsistent with the protagonist's character. It may be a fast-paced novel, so there is no need to highlight this aspect. But no one can refuse a sweet little pet article without any brains, it's still Shuang Jie, this is what you must pay attention to [blowing kiss]

The plot is very attractive, and the forced love is not too tight or too loose. This just right feeling makes me like reading this novel. The deputy CPs Shen Ci and Wen Zixu are really annoying. I like Wen Zixu's character very much. I hope their emotional journey will be less frustrating. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

I think this book is very good-looking, and the overall feeling is quite relaxing.

He has been working overtime a lot these days to handle official duties, and Fu Yancheng just takes pleasure in his misfortune. Whenever Shen Yi'an started asking him for help, Fu Yancheng started to make conditions. He really sold himself out completely during this period. Now it's Fu Yancheng's turn to be frustrated. How could Shen Yian give up? After Shen Yi'an finished speaking, he ran away. Fu Yancheng looked at his cheerful back and said with a smile: "This little heartless guy."