After Developing into a Sickly and Pretty Girl, I Left

Overall, it's okay. The main character has a decent outlook on life. The male and female protagonists get along well with each other. There's no takeover plot. (Although the heroine's initially yandere partner was not the hero, she wasn't emotionally attracted to Xia Xing. Later, the description was more like the heroine was too withdrawn and needed a friend. This Xia Xing drove away everyone around her and then monopolized all the feelings. After becoming a "friend", the heroine didn't love him but needed someone to accompany him. Judging from this situation, the heroine is very pure.) The emotional line is also handled well, I can give it 4 stars. The heroine is so softly written. I really like this kind of writing. I would give it 5 stars for encouragement.

① This book is one of the few that depicts the male protagonist in depth. Many authors focus on portraying the female protagonist and ignore the character of the male protagonist, which sometimes makes the reading very bad. My book does not have a standardized Asashi, but Purposefully being gentle to others is reflected in the heroine in the first chapter, and sometimes the male protagonist is quite funny o(￣ヘ￣o#), and it can be seen that he has true feelings for the heroine o(￣ヘ￣o#) ②The portrayal of the heroine is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, and the transformation from before to after is also very natural and the contrast is cute. Especially the heroine in the first chapter left a deep impression on me. At first I wanted to poke the male protagonist, but later I wanted to poke the hero more o(￣ヘ￣o#)[][Laugh][Laughter][Laughter][Laughter][Laugh]. Similarly, the heroine in the second chapter is also very cute. ③The writing style is relaxed and a little sad, with comedy mixed with sadness (๑•́ ₃ •̀๑). What I particularly like is that the author did not use the system to improve the number of words (although it was a little watered down), and there are very few scenes, almost acting as a tool o(￣ヘ￣o#) To sum up, I hope the author will write more realistic things. After all, the chapters about these two women are too long. I think five heroines at your speed are enough. I hope to come to my favorite Shura field soon [sneaky laugh]o(￣ヘ￣o#)

The writing is really good, it's a bit touching and brings me to tears. Maybe it's because I feel the same way, but if a yandere has been around for such a long time, to be honest, it's not suitable for this title and introduction. Really, either the front line is too long, or it's uneven. I think this is quite suitable for singles. As for the female protagonist, I can't even imagine how painful it would be if every female protagonist was so touching and separated in the end. If there are multiple female protagonists, there must be more than one. If they come one by one at the end, the higher the number, the more uncomfortable it will be [face covering] I respect the author, but I really hope that the writing will not be unfinished.

The theme of Jin's prodigal son, but this book has a new flavor, not bad, I like Xiao Jiang, Xiao Jiang is so cute [laughing] Is the heroine single? If you really hope that there won't be too many female protagonists, because the book "The Prodigal Son" has a lot of nerves in the front and back in the book, and the tonic is following his old path! ! !

Start recommending [shy] Pursuing data is very important, don't beg for help [blowing kiss]

Good-looking girl, cool girl, white mobile phone, Weiwei, looking at the sky. I know the smell of the sea. The author probably wrote it while soaking in the water☝️🤓In addition, the author Kavin's kung fu is also top-notch😅

It's very interesting, the male protagonist's outlook on life is correct [Thinking][Like] Xia Xingzhen CS

It's very interesting. The author is really good at writing about the emotions between people. Little Jiang Yue is also very cute~ Definitely worth five stars, but the author is too short on the number of words~ Although he knows how to write emotions in this way, the author needs to update it fiercely [crying][crying][crying]

The advantages are that the heroine is well described in the first part, and the second part is more toxic and can be read. The disadvantages are that the writing is quite serious starting from the second part. The specific manifestation is that many words will appear several times in a chapter, which affects the reading experience, such as the system opening prompt sound. There is really no need to make it appear seven or eight times in a chapter, and only half of it appears at one time! There are even places where the system's beeps are only two pages apart. You see the beeps on the first page, and they appear again after turning two or three pages. At the same time, some of the timing of these beeps lack a certain logic. What impressed me the most was that in the second chapter, the male protagonist had clearly seen the system before, but then he saw the system again when he was having an emotional scene with the female protagonist, and he simply opened it and then wrote the emotional scene. This was very abrupt! Questions like this, and "he/she pursed her lips" also appear frequently, which may be related to the author's writing skills. The other is that several heroines have the same modal particles. Language is an important reflection of the character. Even if the heroines are all yandere, they are people with different personalities. I think the same modal particles should not be used to express their yandere characteristics. For example, when they have the yandere attribute, they always add 'Na' and 'Ne' in front or after the language. I think these do not reflect their respective yandere attributes. To sum up, the first article is amazing, and the subsequent ones can be read during the book shortage. I encourage the author to work hard!

It's good to read, but the main character has a lot of content in his heart, but after reading it, he seems to have missed it, and some words appear too many times, which makes reading a bit visual fatigue. Overall, it's okay. Come on, the author [laughing]

The author should not always be good-looking and good-looking [laughs awkwardly]

I only remember a few words from the set. Don't ask, there are at least four in each chapter. See you chapter by chapter. "Ang" "Raise the corners of your mouth slightly" "Gently purse the corners of your mouth" "Lower your eyes slightly"

I wonder if the sensitivity of sight that the eldest lady has repeatedly emphasized will become an opportunity to find the protagonist after entering the protagonist's world. For example, the new eldest lady makes a public appearance and is discovered by the protagonist through the broadcast. Then the thugs find the city or even the community where they are. Then the characteristic of the game girl is influence. The top game talent and high popularity will give her a wider and faster source of information. The twins can't see it at the moment. If the two reconcile, it is not impossible for the sister's super brain to help the tsundere sister airborne to meet [Thinking][Thinking]

I just started reading this author's book. I heard they gave him nicknames. I knew it would be difficult. I feel pretty good after reading Chapter 11. I want to rate it first. I read the introduction because it has multiple female protagonists and yandere. I thought it might be interesting. After reading it, I felt it was okay. Except for the corners of my mouth appearing too much in the previous article, there are no other places where I personally feel uncomfortable. There are too few chapters at the moment. I will continue to read and talk about it. Come on, author.

To be honest, the emotional line of this book is really well written, and the heroine's character is also described very well. So can the author find me a Xiaoyue? I really want a girlfriend who is clingy, cute, rich and considerate😭😭😭

I think the author's writing style is really suitable for writing about sweet daily life. I really like the author's writing style. These chapters are well written

I just finished watching the first heroine. I thought she was a yandere kind of girl, but she turned out to be a very cute girl... You won't feel like you have a harem illustrated book, but a living little girl waiting eagerly for you to come home every day. When I watched it, I always had the vision of raising a daughter... I'll give it five stars first, and we'll see what happens later [Salute]

Where is the psychological committee member? I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe. I can't breathe.

Can we not use so many adjectives, especially those that are repeated a lot? I'm tired of seeing pretty girls and white mobile phones.

It's super sweet, the male protagonist has good views, and the author portrays each female protagonist very cute and unique. Although it is a daily plot, it is not boring at all, but warm and healing. Highly recommended! Fast forward to Shura Field [crying]

The three dungeons of the protagonist now correspond to the life of the third year of high school (or maybe the third year of junior high school), the summer after graduation (playing all the time), and college (really attending a semester) [face covering], how can you not feel young?

I'm so cool, I finally found this extraordinary book. The writing is delicate and the emotional lines are not abrupt. But can the author be faster? I want to see when the heroine comes to this world. I'm so looking forward to it. Bro

Is the plot getting longer and longer? So when will the imaginary Shura Field come? Hey, I really liked this book. The first part was really well written, and the second part was also good. Why did I fall behind in the third part? And the updates are getting slower and slower, which is a pity.

Can't the protagonist always stay in another world? Then it doesn't matter whether he returns to the original world or not. The protagonist can also enjoy being a human being in another world. [What][What]

Let me say a few words. The word Weiwei is used too much. On the previous page, I saw Weiwei raising her eyes, and on the next page, I saw Weiwei looking at the sky. It really affected the perception. When I saw these words, I felt a little confused. You know, other than this, there is no big problem. Come on.

It's beautiful. I'm looking forward to what I will write next.

The heroine is not very emotional towards Xia Xing, but he is her only friend (she is almost always being teased by Xia Xing), which isolates her, makes her feel inferior, and makes her think that she will only have Xia Xing as a friend, and the hero is also very kind to her. Originally, if a yandere likes someone, and the male protagonist comes to attack him, and the yandere is also very nice to the yandere, it would be shabby, but this look is not that disgusting. Xia Xing's character is really bad, not bad

The author who respects good-looking girls the most on QuanTomato

The plot is good. I feel like there are no more than three yandere heroines. This book should be good. I want a single female protagonist, I want a single female protagonist, I want a single female protagonist

Good guy, Golden Boy. Show no mercy. Good guy. Why do I read yandere novels? I won't tell you. You all know. Oh, it's good-looking. But show no mercy. When will a beautiful girl travel to the protagonist?~~~