Pokemon: The Meme-Worthy Trainer

Give Lillie more drama. It feels like the protagonist is talking to other people for a long time, while she just hangs up next to her [face covering]. She can also work on the emotional line, daily interactions and the like.

This book is okay. Although I haven't read much, I personally feel that the protagonist is a bit close to the template of the protagonist I have read before. He is the kind of person who can solve problems that others have been unable to solve for many years in a few words, and others are still relatively powerful. Just say that if a person really says a few words, he can make others realize his mistakes? Maybe, but it's not just a stranger saying a few words, and most children listen to people they admire or respect, so it's impossible to just listen to a random stranger. This is just my personal opinion. I hope it doesn't cause you any inconvenience.

Regarding some issues in my book, I will talk about them here. I hope to help you comrades understand The first point is about the two names of the protagonists. Chen Nuo and Uesugi Promise are both protagonists. Chen Nuo is used for daily narration, while Uesugi Promise only appears in language exchanges. If you want to unify, then according to the frequency of the protagonist Chen Nuo's name appearing in the article, you will want to kill me! ! ! The second point is that the protagonist belongs to the reincarnation belt and has past life memories. You can just understand the past life memories as plug-ins. The third point is that regarding typos and punctuation errors, I am already correcting them. I have looked for them several times, but the previous mistakes have not been corrected. I will correct them slowly here! If you find it, you can also help report the error, so that I can find it easily. The fourth point, regarding the translation of Pokémon and skill names, I will not change them if they have already appeared, and use them uniformly. If they do not appear, you can mention them downstairs, so as not to mention the translations that you don't like, such as the big bird. I guess you prefer the big bird, and the dragon! One more thing! As for your questions, you can raise them in this building in the future and actively discuss them. As long as it's not something as deadly as changing the name of the protagonist in the full text, I will try my best to change the rest for you. Oh! By the way, one more thing! Thank you comrade for your support, I will continue to work hard, and I hope you will support me more! There's one more thing... That's all... Well! (Serious face)

It looks great. I hope I can tame a female vine snake with a devilish trait in the future! ! ! It is forbidden to interrupt updates. I have two beautiful elf novels in my collection, but they have been interrupted for a month! ! ! I almost ran out of good elf writing, but you! Appeared suddenly! ! ! If you stop updating too, I will collapse! [Smile] It is recommended to tame the female New Leaf Cat with the changeable trait and the female Vine Snake with the devilish trait! ! !

Very good. Can the author adopt a snake sister? It's quite useful to play devil's advocate.

This is the best Pokémon fanfic I have ever seen in 🍅🍅. Others either have rainbows or countries. It is really a failure, but I hope the author will finish it [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

Come on, it's just that you can write down the training process. Come on, come on, there are a lot of typos. I suggest you check it after you finish writing. Take your time. Pokémon books are really not very popular in the early stage. Take your time with writing. Don't be in a hurry.

Overall, it's pretty good. You can keep it for now. I'd like to make some small comments. You can agree on Pokémon and Pokémon. I personally prefer Pokémon. Also, when there are only protagonists and Lillie, just write about boys and girls. Boys and girls feel a little uncomfortable with it.

Finally, someone wrote about my grass-roots style and strongly supported it. There are no bad points at the moment. Come on! Looking forward to the future😋😋

Beautiful, highly recommended