I Refuse to Let Her Become an Immortal!

I feel that the writing is great. The whole article is covered with a vague sense of sadness. It is easy for people to empathize with, and the weak men and strong women are very poignant. Okay, although you are strong, you have to listen to me [Read carefully]

No matter what other people think, I really like this book. I think the image of the heroine is really well portrayed. To be honest, I feel that all male-female stories are about strong men and weak women. This is the first time I have seen such a story about strong women and weak men. And although the male protagonist is weak, he does not feel like a drag. The cold-bloodedness of the female protagonist is also very consistent with dark literature. The setting and the emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists are also very well portrayed. Compared with other single-female protagonists, there is a sense of contrast. Because I have been reading for a long time and I am tired of reading many common things, so I really like this sense of contrast. It feels really different, like it makes my numb heart beat again. The only thing I want to scold the author for is that it ended too quickly. When I read more than 100 chapters, I felt that I could still write hundreds of chapters, but it ended in the last 200 chapters. To be honest, it was really difficult to find a book that made me crawl without reading for a while. However, the author ended it so quickly. To be honest, I felt uncomfortable, but I really liked this book. Finally, I want to say that if the author wants to write another book about Liu Hancheng and Luo Yunxi, please write it as a sequel. Don't completely reopen it. If you want to completely reopen it, just change the names of the male and female protagonists. At least even if you don't give this book a sequel, don't take this book out to kill it. I think this is respect for a work, but also respect for the author's hard work and the love of readers. Finally, I hope the author will work hard.

The character portrayal is still very good, the plot is indeed relatively compact as mentioned in the introduction, the world view generally exaggerates the greed and selfish desires of most immortal cultivators, and the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are also more attractive. The only shortcoming is the ending. I suggest that the characters can be enriched and some people with a sense of justice can be added (as long as it does not affect the overall world view).

In fact, the author's writing is much better than most. The plot is relatively novel and the logic is very rigorous. The most important thing is the handling of the relationship between the male and female protagonists. It makes people feel very comfortable and does not have that empty stomach feeling. I often read novels before and felt that they were very formulaic and empty. Although the author's ending is not very good. It's satisfying, but I still really appreciate the author. The author handles the relationship between the two of them really well. There's no such thing as falling in love at first sight, and there's no twists and turns in the plot. Most of them are very reasonable, and the ideas are relatively novel. I really like the feeling of getting along between them. Thank you to the author.

The number of words should be small, if there are more, the data should be better. I feel that this book is not on the right track yet, and many people have the idea of ​​​​keeping a book. Finally, don't give up, author. I think your writing style and setting are quite good. Come on! ! !

Personally, I still like this kind of subject matter, so I give it five stars subjectively (after all, I really like it, and I don't want to be stingy,) There is an obvious problem with this book. It should be some wording problems. Anyway, some places read strangely. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes, and I also hope he can write it to the end without any regrets about breaking the chapter, because I really like it.

No, Lao Deng, I thought you were going to speed through this book, but I didn't expect O. Henry to have nothing at the end, right? [Smile] [Smile] [Smile] I quite enjoyed reading it. In fact, after all, I am also the kind of character who only cares about my own people and doesn't care about others, so I quite like the characters of the male and female protagonists. If you can In fact, I hope to finish this book, but everyone has their own difficulties, and I can't say anything if I force it. I just hope that the author's life will get better and better, write more masterpieces, and if he persists, he will see the dawn. Don't be afraid. If you are Han Cheng, you will one day wait for your own Yunxi. Come on, the future is long.

The writing is quite good. I hope that if I have the chance, I can see the boy take Xiao Qingmei to the modern world to play and experience happiness. Xiao Qingmei is really having a hard time. After reading it, I am very upset about why I don't have childhood sweethearts, haha😂

It's over. Although the ending is not happy, and can even be said to be a regret, it is still my favorite novel. I look forward to the next story between Liu Hancheng and Luo Yunxi✧

It's okay_(:з∠)_Originally I wanted to post a longer comment, but I don't know what to say. The logic is relatively clear, and there are hidden clues. The heroine was not particularly cold-blooded in the early stage, nor was she particularly yandere, but I still don't know what the protagonist is fighting. On the surface, the author writes that he is fighting against the protagonist's master, but I personally feel that he is fighting against shrinking lives and fate. The writing is not bad. The disadvantage is that sometimes it is a bit confusing, but it is much better now. The above is just my personal opinion