Reborn to Raise Two White-Haired Little Twin Girls

Feel good about yourself More than 6 points, am I really drunk, or am I like this just after the score came out [almost crying]

It's good to read. It seems to be overall good so far. However, the author is too candid and has few foreshadowings. He writes whatever he wants and his identity is almost revealed. For example, the earth dragon or the spiritual tribe, this breath is..., And then it is cut off. There may be more room for further development. Of course, the author's framework may have already been set and it won't be extended too much. That's fine, don't go through one world and go to another world. The above is just my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't comment. There are also more stories about An Heran's post. It's fun to watch. [Learned]

After reading Chapter 65, there should be a knife in the future. Even if there is no knife, there will be setbacks and tribulations. People around the protagonist will probably die or be seriously injured. It will take a long time and a lot of money for the protagonist to be resurrected and healed. It would be fun to write about the apocalypse after rebirth. Nowadays, a large number of people don't like to write about setbacks and tribulations.

ε(*´･ω･)зSupport the author. The detailed description, plot laying and dialogue development are all excellent. The early settings are relatively messy, with various concepts and settings shaken off like baggage, and many things lack explanation. After the plot unfolded later, things got a lot better. The male protagonist has a bigger problem. As a male protagonist with a previous life, there are too few things to consider after rebirth (or what the male protagonist explains to the readers). The impact of the male protagonist's rebirth on the battle is also not reflected. (The male protagonist was at a high level before his rebirth, and it was for x years. The information gap and combat advantage brought by being at a high level before his rebirth must be extremely huge.) The male protagonist's mentality also lacks some of the psychological burden and transparency of a desperate middle-aged man before his rebirth, and is more like an aggressive young man. Generally speaking, I feel that when writing, I set this force in the wrong direction. If I find the right direction, I will definitely write more excitingly. (˵¯͒¯͒˵) (ง •̀_•́)งCome on

A post-apocalyptic rebirth story with two heroines (two cute little lolita). Favoring two-way redemption. The heroine is not a vase. The male protagonist is semi-invincible and has limitations. It's not just a cool article. The character portrayal is quite plump, the male protagonist is not brainless, and the two little lolita are particularly cute [blowing kisses] [blowing kisses]. Personally, I think this is pretty good among apocalyptic literature (but I've read relatively few apocalyptic literature). A little bit of a flaw, but it doesn't hide the beauty.

Good book, two loli heroines. Sweet There are so few people, too few. Come on, the author [bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one]

Chapter 309 (latest, level 4, out of ruins), subjective score 9.5, Objective score 8.5, Not bad for those who like loli. I feel that the description of the two lolita characters is quite good, and the advantages of rebirth are still good, which is quite enjoyable. In the early stage, it felt a bit watery, in the middle stage it was okay, but in the later stage, it felt like it was unfinished. It felt like a lot of it was forcibly speeding up the pace. I originally thought it would be good to write it in the mid-term. I would write 9.3 Better, and there would be no problem with 9.4. I feel like I haven't thought about the big frame yet.

Author, I'm trying my best to promote it to you. Don't stop updating.

There are some minor flaws, but overall it's OK. I would like to ask if the author wants to write my sister as a yandere, right? But never

Lolicon control, girl control ecstasy [laughing evilly] It's pretty cool