Insectoid: I’m Old-Fashioned, So This Really Won’t Do, My Queen

Of course I should give my book a five-star review! I hope everyone will like it. [Love] If you have any problems, you can point them out. I will read slowly, learn slowly, and change slowly. I am a novice. Although I have read a lot of articles, my eyes are black when I take pictures.

I like this article very much. It is different from the settings of some Zerg articles. The setting can show the author's intention. Each character has its own unique charm. Ian, Green, each character has its own charm. But there is one shortcoming. It may be the first time I try this style full of Machiavellian charm. The description and processing of transitions and organization give people a feeling of fragmentation and incoherence. It feels like there are many things that are not explained clearly and it starts in a confused manner. And when the plots collide, it's a bit chaotic. There are many villains in the traditional sense, which gives me the feeling that the whole world is against the protagonist and them. Then there is the robbery, which I think is too compact even for a growth story. There is also a protagonist who has almost no ability to fight back and will definitely be hurt. The long-term tension and similar endings will give people a sense of exhaustion. But I must admit that the author's high level of knowledge and what he wanted to express, including some descriptions, made me take screenshots and take notes.

I finished the game in one go. When I saw the Zerg setting, I thought it was about love or ordinary farming. Unexpectedly, it turned out to be a plot about business. It has an exciting main line. It is very interesting to watch. It is just this secret poke and fun. The supporting roles are also good. I like to watch this kind of game between smart people. It is not like the scenes where they stand on the street and have a brainless quarrel. It is really painful to watch. I can't tell from the writing style and logic that it's a new author. Teacher, please believe that you can write well, and please be sure to work harder to update!

If you like watching, come on⸜૮* ॑^꒳^* ა⋆*Five stars for encouragement It's just that the transitions need to be improved. Every transition is like a hit on my head, it goes blank, and then it goes to the next one. Can't connect. [Laughing and crying]

Suddenly it occurred to me that the author of a novel that I like would indicate on the book cover what he borrowed from it.

Precious objects, noble people [worm] •The plot is exciting, the logic is reasonable [referring to the reaction in another world], and the characters are quite fleshed out •Highlights: Language barrier, struggling in a different world, social contradictions of the Zerg Small shortcomings: some passages are unclear and some scene jumps are a bit abrupt. Come on [like]

It's actually a Machiavellian novel [laughing and crying], which is not very friendly to my brain. I was stunned for a while while reading it. I had to listen to the book to make it less strenuous. It would be a bit tiring to read. The emotional line between attack and reception seems to be a bit lacking. They are not married yet, which makes me feel sad.

Among Tomato's Zerg novels, it's quite good. In terms of world background and details, it's a bit similar to JJ's live broadcast about pure love (the plot is completely different x3, there is no c, just like writing a post-apocalyptic novel, zombies in the world background will have the same meaning as crystal nuclei) [face covering] Special species, male worms are raised by Saint Laurent, etc. The author can dig deeper. The end of more than 100 chapters will be rushed, and if it is written more carefully, it can definitely explode. No, it will become more and more fragmented as you read the next ten chapters. Author, it is okay for you to borrow the setting, but don't just use a word suddenly. For example, the coat of arms for identification, planet setting, fluorescent species, etc., Suddenly appear, with no foreshadowing in the front, and no introduction in the back. It only appears once, without beginning or end. I have read that article, and even if I can borrow it, I feel it is very fragmented and abrupt, let alone readers who have never read it.

It is a very clever book, with good conception and some emotional expressions. However, it lacks coherence in sentences and paragraphs. It needs to be read by someone who is good at association, so that the picture will be better. Just looking at the words and sentences will make it confusing. Overall, it should be said that this is an article with potential and spirituality. I look forward to the author's subsequent development (refill)

It's okay, the story is quite interesting and interesting. Moreover, it is a rare Zerg novel that does not rely heavily on male insects, and both male protagonists are relatively strong. Unlike the common Zerg literature, although the female Zerg is very powerful, she is powerless in many things, and in the end it needs a powerful male Zerg to solve the problem. It's just that there are inconsistencies in content in many places. It makes readers feel like they missed a chapter. It was so sudden that I had to go back and check it several times 😂