In the Wasteland Era, Survival Is What Matters

The introduction attracted me. I saw that the protagonist's family had awakened to their supernatural powers and their lives were getting better and better. The protagonist also found a partner, but the partner disappeared again. It seemed that there was no role for him in the rest. It was too sudden. If you like this kind of article, you can read it...

It's very interesting, the content is interesting and engaging! It's just too little, please update more soon!

An author worthy of encouragement, careful and meticulous, with few typos. The slightly immature writing style would have ended dull without the last few extra chapters. Come on💪The author is big [love][love][love][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

The writing is good. The heroine is not too obtrusive, nor is she too stupid or ignorant. She has a sense of prevention. She does not confess everything she likes as soon as she meets someone good-looking like other novels. She has a sense of autonomy, is not overly charitable, has revenge, and is aware of current affairs. The plot is also very good, including wilderness radiation, supernatural powers, games, and cultivating immortals. The other characters are not particularly annoying, but there are a few small holes that have not been filled.

It's not bad, but later on it becomes fantasy and becomes the ending of cultivating immortals and ascending to heaven. Especially Lin Yi and the heroine turned out to be lovers in the past and present life [awkward laughter]

The overall structure is okay, the jump is a bit big, the small scenes of the story are good, the apocalyptic story combines supernatural powers and immortality, the characters are vivid and real, the emotional line is lacking and a bit messy. Personally I think it's 8.5 Points.

Overall it's good

I just want to know if there is space.

It doesn't hurt to take a look at the book shortage

Looks good, turned out great