Quick Transmigration: The Gorgeous Cannon Fodder Is Targeted by a Madman in the Shadows

I have watched the first world so far, and the characters are very good. I particularly like it. The bad thing is that the words in the comment section are too gorgeous. Some of the words are used very weirdly, which is weird and makes people feel uncomfortable. Some adjectives are too many, which makes people feel as if they are simply showing off their skills. To be honest, I personally think that the end of literature is to return to nature. So many gorgeous rhetoric will only make people feel weird and tiring to read. Isn't this type of novel just for ordinary readers like us? We all have different levels of education. Really good works should be appreciated by both refined and popular people. Good writing does not mean gorgeous rhetoric. But the character design is indeed so good-looking. The above minor shortcomings can sometimes be ignored. The character design is really good and I have nothing to say.

It's very exciting, although the rhetoric is a bit too gorgeous, and it even affects reading a bit, but! ! ! ! ! Immortal product! ! ! ! ! I really like to see the kind of cool guy who thinks he is sober and sinks, especially the brother's self-pull. Half of his reason tells himself that this is indulgence, and the other half of his emotions pulls the cage of reason, much like a muzzled hound (black Doberman), but the muzzle is already shaky. Although it looks like it is squatting there calmly, he is ready to pounce on his little master. Even now, he feels that he is the one who has the initiative. It smells so good, and there is Xiaowei, who looks on coldly and even utters bad words. In the final analysis, it is just one sentence, why don't you look at me (stray dog Xiaowei). As for Xiaosu, I can only think of the emoticon "I have my own plans. I'll pretend to be fascinated first, and you don't have to worry about it." The girl is also a very good girl, like a long-tusked kitten (wild version) that looks soft and weak, and confused. In fact, anyone who has kidnapped a kitten knows that kittens are not willing to bite and scratch people. As long as you make her uncomfortable, she will bite you, and then rub you with a guilty conscience. Next time, she can block the road and grab the cat strips like a normal person.

The big book is nice to read, but it doesn't feel as good as the first one. This book has too many words. Although it is very gorgeous and well-described, it is described with a lot of gorgeous words. It is easy for people to ignore the progress of the protagonist's plot. Too many detailed descriptions will delay it. As for the development of the plot, it is easy to read a short world without paying attention and feel lost. I feel that we should pay more attention to the trend of the plot instead of describing the body movements of the characters too much. However, the content of the story is still very exciting and interesting. If it is improved, the reading volume will increase a lot. Chapter 45 of the first world has brought back the feeling of the first book. It has gorgeous words but not so many plots to connect with it. It's a good read, so please don't put it off.

Damn it, why is it so low rated? Ah? I'm really convinced Can you understand? Such a high-quality article, such a delicate writing style, and the characters portrayed so clearly, I really feel like I am going to die, I really recommend it! ! ! ! I was really captivated by the character's portrayal. I even had the urge to run towards the big brother. How can you be so powerful? ? Tell me! OMG I'm so excited! Step by step, that kind of yandere feeling is so well written, so morbid... Oh my god... I love you so much! I searched and searched, and what you wrote was so touching to me... It won my heart... Everyone will really enjoy reading it, the writing is so good! So satisfied I support you greatly [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] I thought of the author being around her and praising her. I suspect that you have a deep understanding of yandere. Why can you write so well? [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] I read chapter after chapter and it really made me happy

The writing style is as good as ever [Love]

The author's writing style is very good. After reading the author's book, I can't read other Tomato books. Every scene is described very appropriately and naturally, while in other books, I have to imagine the scene by myself. I have read all 4 books. The male and female protagonists are set up very well. Each female protagonist has her own characteristics, and each male protagonist has a very distinct personality. I like the one by Gu Ying the best. The book feels gentle and beautiful. I'm not saying that the other three books don't have these meanings, but everyone touches different points. The first time I read the author's book was in Gu Ying's book. When I saw such a well-written book, I fell in love with it immediately. It's similar to Bai Yueguang's feeling. I hope the author can have a good rest while rushing to finish the manuscript. I hope the author will get better and better! [Laughing out loud]

Although it is said to be a fierce competition, I don't feel that it is very intense. It is just a drizzle and occasional showers. It's not as well written as the previous one, but it's still pretty good. The writing is very delicate, but the ending is too rushed, it's only one chapter, not hehehe, but it's still very interesting. I like the later stage of the third world. It has the flavor of crazy people criticizing yandere and crazy people. In the early stage, it is just like a small emotion, not very strong, but in the later stage, there is a huge contrast. The male protagonist in the fourth world is really good at fishing.

I haven't finished reading the first world yet. The content and setting are all very good, but I feel that there are a lot of embellishments. There are a lot of actions and other embellishments between the two sentences. After reading the second sentence, I forgot what the first sentence was. I wonder if there will be the same amount of embellishments in the later chapters. I feel a bit tired, but the setting and the main direction of the story are very interesting.

It's awesome. It's awesome. It's great. It's great. It's great. It's written just for my XP. Boss, your writing is so awesome. I love it so much. It's really like the Invincible Big Mac. It's so awesome. It's awesome. It's awesome. It's awesome. , Boss, I want to read your books for the rest of my life. I have read all your books and they are still my favorites. I feel so happy after reading them. I like them so much. I want to read them for the rest of my life. Boss, I want to haunt you for the rest of my life...

The tension between the male and female protagonists in this book is very interesting, but the author's writing style is a bit inexperienced. Sometimes it is too gorgeous, and sometimes I don't know what it is written. It makes people unable to understand even a sentence and has to rely on guessing. Overall, the plot is okay, but the writing is a bit lacking. But it's pretty good-looking, very exciting xp [laughing][laughing]