Rejected After Confessing My Love, I Transmigrate to the Primitive Era with the Campus Belle

The writing is quite good, but the name is a little bit intimidating. I really ran out of books to read, so I clicked in one by one to find this book. I hope the author can change the title to a better one.

Regarding the leakage of bronze technology, let me explain it. I have written several farming novels, and I know that the leakage of advanced technology is poisonous. Therefore, the leakage of bronze technology I wrote put great restrictions on those primitive people. Tell me your own understanding. Of course, everyone has their own opinion, and you don't have to accept it. After all, it is just a novel, and it all depends on personal preference. Making bronze is not that easy. The protagonist just wants to use other clans to improve the mineral map and accumulate resources. This is a carefully considered point. Without blowing equipment, stoves and charcoal (not ordinary wood, most primitive people did not understand that charcoal can provide higher temperatures), they would not be able to make qualified bronze weapons in a short time. There was no guidance on the development of bronze, which would allow them to ponder for many years, maybe hundreds of years. The status of weapons in cold weapon combat is not as good as armor (personal understanding). According to the setting in the novel, primitive people are slightly stronger than us ordinary people. In their mobile phones, stone tools and bone tools are actually about the same as inferior (emphasis on inferior) bronze. Bronze tools have the advantage of sharpness, but their toughness may not be as good as some bone tools. So what I think is that having armor is the most important thing. Armor technology and crossbow technology will never leak out, and the same goes for subsequent iron tools. Some of the suggestions are reasonable, and I like them all, but there are some parts that I won't modify. It's difficult for a long farming novel to be completely reasonable. (Occasionally I still borrow ideas from comments, hahaha) Finally, thank you for your comments and suggestions. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Very good idea. The author's writing style is not bad and he is relatively literate. He may be very good at writing, but at present, when it comes to writing novels, he is not yet perfect at handling character dialogue and detailed descriptions. However, it may also be because the author's writing style is different. Come on! The book is pretty good The author, I sincerely give you a suggestion. After you finish writing a chapter, don't post it yet. Then enrich the details of the characters' dialogue, demeanor, environment and other details. In this way, one chapter may become two chapters. This does not mean that the author should limit the number of words. I feel like this book has something to it. The author's storyline moves forward relatively quickly and smoothly, but it feels like it's not detailed enough. Because if there is less dialogue between characters, the characterization will not be vivid. If there is less description of the environment, the prehistoric world will not be filled in enough. If it were me, I could write 80 words out of the author's 30 words.

When Chen Feng reached a certain age, he unexpectedly discovered that he would not grow old. In the past few years, after sadly sending away those around me, I became disheartened. Decided not to know the world and traveled around the mainland. Watch the silent development of mankind behind the scenes One day, he discovered a power within himself, which he named psionic power. Realizing the extraordinary power of this force, he decided to go out and lead mankind again. This time his goal was the stars and the sea. 40 Thousand years later, Chen Feng sat on the golden toilet and recalled the past

As an ancient farming novel, it is not just farming, fighting, and having fun. It gives people enough immersion. The protagonist is not too serious, has a good personality, neither a saint nor cruel. You can also add some knowledge.

It's okay. The male protagonist belongs to the Long Aotian family and has no dog-licking behavior. These two points alone surpass 90% of Tomato's survival stories. I hope that all four of these women will be included. Don't make a mess of things.

I came here from the last book. This book is also good. I read the latest chapter in one go.

It's pretty good. I hope they don't add systems and so on in the future, but do more work, at least to make it look like modern times. The author still has some details. I want to develop it as soon as possible. Later, I can come up with currency and make transactions more transparent. I have laid the foundation for making a hand-operated generator and mastering electricity as soon as possible.

Well written. After reading the previous point, I judged that this is a good book. I think martial arts and technology can develop together, how about it? After all, this novel is a bit fantasy, and the system can be returned later [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

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