Lightning Fruit from the Start, Shikigami of the Akatsuki

The protagonist can start very well. [Sneaky smile] Green Hair, Invincible is a good read.

The setting is to my liking, and it's rare to see Double Star fanfics. Come on I think a proper secondary character is pretty good, after all, the King of Despair is handsome and mouth-toothed. However, it is recommended to use some adjectives to describe the appearance and temperament of the protagonist.

Someone actually brought Double Star's Onmyoji to play, I cried to death [cry][cry][cry]

You don't have to do it, it's very good and very refreshing. I hope it won't be unfinished and I'll keep updating. A good book with a score of nine or more. It's a cool harem story, and it's very good to do whatever you want.

The author still needs to read the Onmyoji comics. There are a lot of thunders in the later stages of the comics. The Queen of Heaven was around 20 years old and she had thunders with Posora, and the old Loli woman and an Onmyoji also had thunders in the later stages of the comics. The author can add more, and if you see it, you can reply to me and express your feelings [smile]

Regarding the subject of double-star onmyoji, it is rare. The male protagonist is very strong and the plot is very good. There is no clichéd slap-in-the-face plot. Some people may think that the male protagonist is a middle-aged man. I think he is quite handsome. Come on, author, don't stop updating [laughter]

An unpopular but interesting variety comic. It's the first time I've seen a work with Twin Stars: Onmyoji. I support it with five stars. I'm looking forward to Su Ge.

Twin Stars: Onmyoji is well written, with multiple female protagonists, and the integration of various animations is good. The subject matter and male protagonist are also very lovable. I will continue to develop it steadily in the future. If it does not write poisonous points, this book will be very good, and it is a high-quality fan comic.

You can write more about other anime. Your book will definitely be popular. The pacing is very good. The protagonist doesn't pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger. Moreover, the protagonist you wrote is also very handsome. It's not like some novels where the protagonist is mediocre and the female character has to fall in love with him.

The writing is great. It is rare to see fan works about Double Star and Zombie. It brings back childhood memories [laughing and crying]. The character descriptions in the book are very consistent with the original work. The protagonist's characterization is also very good, making it more immersive. It's just that the length is a bit short and not enough to read. Come on, the author, it's so interesting and I'd love to read it, I highly recommend it!