Wuthering Waves: What If She Weren’t the Protagonist?

They are all good, but the author obviously doesn't know how to write more excitingly. After reading more than 20 chapters, I felt that the protagonist had to fight with all his strength to fight anyone, and was seriously injured and on the verge of death. I understand what the author was thinking, but the author may have put the focus on the wrong place. It is good that the protagonist does not follow the original plot, but there is no need to weaken the protagonist. The main thing should be described as another drifter (the main character). The actions and stories of the character outside the plot, what choices he would make and how he would feel when looking at the problem from another angle, but when I looked at it, I only saw that the protagonist felt that so and so was dangerous and unfathomable in his heart. Every time he encountered a crisis, his inner activities were like "Is this the end?"

In fact, I am an undercover agent of Genshin Impact, not because I like to watch [laughter]

The plot content is good, but the only drawback is that the protagonist is the drifter himself. In the original plot, even if the drifter lost all his memory, his IQ was still very high, let alone his combat prowess, he just came up and fucked his big brother. I haven't read much yet and have only read Chapter 14, but judging from the current situation, with the IQ of a drifter, if you meet someone who obviously has the same dress style and even the same voice as you, you will definitely make further guesses. But Yongshuang didn't. As a drifter, he didn't notice that the location of the stigmata on her (the drifter's) hand was exactly the same as his own. I hope this can be improved in the future, so I give you four stars🍉

I have read more than ten chapters so far and I think they are still interesting. However, the protagonist seems too weak at the beginning. I don't know how long it will take for the protagonist's strength to improve qualitatively. Will the author keep writing? There are so few Ming Chao articles. I still hope that the author can keep writing. After all, I think Ming Chao's modeling is good-looking and the story is exciting. The author can continue to enjoy writing another protagonist, right? I still hope that the author can polish this work well, and I will give you gifts 😘😘😘

Generally speaking, I feel that the subject matter is interesting, but the plot is not comfortable enough. There is no pretense or anything like that. It just feels normal and not enough for Long Aotian. The main reason is that I can basically guess the content just by looking at the catalog. I hope there will be a female protagonist later, and the protagonist should be the real Long Aotian, who is relatively invincible, so that it will not make people feel uncomfortable.

It's really going to be hard to write later, so update slowly. It's okay to stop updating before the version is updated, but don't leave it unfinished. 👍

I hope there will be more female protagonists [laughing]

I bet that even if this book is not finished in the end, it will become an important milestone for early Mingchao fandom. It is worth remembering. The plot of 1.0 Is much better than that of Clow, and the connection in 1.1 Is also very natural. According to the author's writing skills, even if Clow's plot gets sick again later, the author can still write it well. (It's a pity that Kuro's background is not as rich as that of Mi Jia next door, otherwise, Ming Chao's fans wouldn't be so scarce.)

It looks great. After playing Mingchao, I completely forgot the meaning of travel. Now all I can think about is my Jinshu.

It looks good, but there is no main story. I remember that there are quite a lot of big and small tasks in Mingchao. I really like my grandpa, I really like it, I really like it, and Changli Favorite Come on author 70 draws long distance. 30 Draws more. 30 Draws less weapon. Is the author out?