My Husband Risks Everything to Win My Favor, So I Pack Up and Flee in the Middle of the Night

It's very well written. There is no shortage of scum in any era. It's just a matter of looking at the so-called fairness. Women are superior to men, and men are inferior to women. Isn't this the case in ancient Chinese feudal society for thousands of years?

A particularly good-looking novel about a heroine is a heroine in the true sense. Men are groveling, but the heroine, as a soul who has traveled through the new century, also wants to change this unfair situation. However, the heroine is not a virgin, and she must avenge her. What I like most is that even if a man hates her to the extreme, he still has to take good care of his wife and take care of her at all times without even the slightest offense. There were several books I read before where the wife was pushed down and killed in a fit of rage, and then the heroine traveled through time. He even disregarded the lives of his entire family and contradicted his wife. It's very exciting to watch. In short, I hope the author can read more and enjoy it more! ! [Ask for more explosive updates][Ask for explosive updates][Send your heart][Send your heart]

I don't know if the author can see it, but I would like to make some suggestions. I feel that what the author wants to express is always described in long paragraphs. Often it takes more than half of the article to describe someone's inner activities. Not only does it describe what it is, but it also explains why. Personally, I feel that sometimes it is not necessary to be so detailed. Just one or two sentences, just to the point, and readers will understand by themselves. There is no need to explain everything in detail, which will give people a very delayed impression and a lot of cumbersome writing. Often after a chapter, the information density is too low. It is all about psychological activities, description of appearance, and not much plot advancement. The other thing is some of the author's own values. These things can be written in the book, no problem, but just stick to that point. Writing too much and being too complex will give people a preachy feel. At present, I feel that the biggest problem is that the description is too cumbersome and not concise enough. I often write about the development of things and then talk about the characters, and then start to describe the changes of the characters and what the characters think in large paragraphs. Instead, things do not develop much, and they are all about exploring the characters. It is unnecessary to be verbose. After all, this is a novel, and the characters are important, but telling a story well is even more important. The characters can be interspersed in the story to be reflected, and there is no need to go into too much detail. It is best to just focus on it. Other than that, I feel that everything is pretty good. The story has its own setting, which can fulfill the logic of the story. There are many characters, but the characteristics of each character are written out with a certain degree of distinction. This is also a reflection of the great writing power. Normally I wouldn't give such a long review. It's really a pity. I hope I can hone my writing skills more. How can such a sufficient story setting not be paired with better writing? And I personally think it has great potential. I just hope that some consideration can be given to this aspect and it would be better if it can be improved. I wish you better and better in your writing journey!

This is my first time reading a novel with multiple male protagonists. The writing is really good. I like it! Love watching! More updates! I just discovered it a little early and read it all at once, which makes me want to stop. [Thinking] [Thinking] I hope it will be less cruel later on, haha

At first glance, it was very tasty! No tricks or golden fingers. It's logical and I like it very much! There are not many Wenchengs with brains left, everyone is welcome to take a look There are all bosses behind me. Maybe I have some conceptual issues, but I want to express my thoughts. After the boss appears, he hugs the heroine around like a child? Is this really a female portrait? Not a romance novel? ? I've read Chapter 272, but I guess I can only get to this point.

It's a great day at the beginning of the day, long time no see [love] [love] [love] The writing style of Da Da is still familiar. I didn't expect to catch Da Da in Tomato, ahhhhhhhhhhh I'm so happy, I've been waiting for it for a few years, I didn't expect that one day I would actually be caught, hahahahaha I hope this book can be continued to be updated and supported. Mmmada [love] [love] [love] Damn it, why are the ratings so low? [Petrochemical] Are you crazy? Why does such a beautiful article have such a low rating? God cannot tolerate it, ah ah ah ah [angry][angry][angry][angry][angry]

It's so good, I finished it in one sitting. The characters in it are very vivid and vivid. The heroine is principled and responsible, but not the Virgin. It's really good-looking. [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates] I read a few more updated chapters and found that the three views of this book are really upright. Although it is a romance novel, it also reflects some realities to a certain extent, such as the indifference, warmth and love between people... Also, the names of the protagonists in the book are so "beautiful" and feel poetic and meaningful. Why isn't this book 🔥 yet? ! !

Come on, madam! Love my wife's style! Woo hoo hoo, I will definitely become a loyal fan [cry][cry][send my heart]

Very good book that kept me spinning most of the night! I really like that the male protagonists have different personalities but are united! The heroine is really badly dressed, and she has become a scapegoat. She has coaxed this and that, hhh, it is a very interesting article, very novel and interesting. I hope the author, Mommy, can update it ten thousand times a day and finish it well! I will keep chasing it! Mommy, don't be affected by the strange insults! Who scolds whom for being dishonest(?)

Super super super awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! I've been waiting for a long time to receive my wife's new book. I'm really happy (*^▽^*). I love it so much.