Magic Awakening: My First Element Is Support

It's not bad, but the pace is a bit fast, and some of the plot lines are not explained clearly. In addition, I feel that the description of Goldfinger's appearance is a bit brief and blunt. However, the flaws do not hide its flaws. On Tomato, this book is considered a good book, and the writing is not bad. It is one of the few good novels that I can read on Tomato. (Because I've read too many of JJ's two-male protagonists, I'm not quite used to Tomato's writing style and writing style) Finally, I hope the author will continue to write. If nothing happens, I will keep chasing it. Come on!

🈚️Poisonous and delicious, come on! It's a good read. I'm the kind of person who likes to save a few hundred chapters and wait until the author has more chapters before reading it. I've read this book twice (the first part has more than 800 chapters). There's nothing too shocking, and it's a little bit refreshing. I feel that the biggest shortcoming for me is that the early stage of the relationship is a bit unnatural, mainly the confession part. It was indeed a bit critical at that time, maybe because there wasn't much description of Song's feelings in the early stage, which made Wen's confession a bit stiff. It'll be better later on, the emotional line should be relatively fast, after all, this book is quite long. Another point is that the plot is rich. For someone like me who has always read short stories before, being able to read it shows that the plot is quite good. I'm now going to finish reading the book three times, so I'll leave a book review before that. Finally, the author, please swear to me: I will update 10 chapters every day, and I will continue to update unless there are special circumstances, and I will never be unfinished. I want readers to eat the best articles and the best meals. Come on, the author [sends heart] [shy] [shy] is waiting for you

It still looks good, but two contradictions have been discovered. The first one is the first magic saint in mankind, Emperor Xi. Although he is a superpower, his ability is a bit too heaven-defying. After death, he can make the two protagonists go back to the past. Compared with other magic saints, it feels like it is not on the same level. But he was so powerful and died. There is also Little A. Little A is relatively the highest-tech product in the protagonist's plane, but he is as advanced as the mechanical race in the mechanical plane, and the technological civilization of the mechanical race is much worse than human civilization.

Big cheers for the author! Love it!

After searching for a long time, I finally found a novel I like. I think this one is really suitable. It doesn't have to be too high-profile or outrageous, and it's logical. Most high-scoring golden fingers are too outrageous, and love comes suddenly. This book has a buffer for love. I really like it. Every team member is unique. I really like it, really like it, really like it. I say the important things three times. I hope the author writes more books

The writing is a bit immature and there are some bugs, but the overall plot is still okay. The plot doesn't have too many twists and turns, so I'll want to keep watching it, and it's more of an upgrade. Five stars for the author's hard work in coding.

It looks good, but the author doesn't seem to know how to use periods. All sentences end with exclamations [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

I just saw Chapter 122. Well, I just feel that any opportunity is there. Give it to Song Yaohui. Well, if there is a mercenary group, it is better to cultivate forces. It is good for each team member to increase their strength and have their own characteristics. We will grow together and become two strong.

Maybe the author's writing style was not very good at the beginning, but I saw that the writing becomes more and more fluent later, and the world view is very large, the plot rhythm is compact but not perfunctory, and the characterization of the protagonist and supporting characters is also very complete. It feels like I am accompanying the growth of the protagonist and the author.

I really, really wanted to see the fighting scene, but when it came, they all flew away.