Punishment! Is This a Short Play or a Murder Video?

The author's writing is still good, but this is not the reason why I gave it five stars. The reason why I rated it and gave it five stars is because the author stayed up most of the night and liked my comments at three or four in the morning.

Thank you all foster parents for urging me to update, adding bookshelves, generating electricity with love and five-star praise [shy][shy][shy]!

Except for the frequent dirty jokes, this book is very good, with a fast pace, a clear story, and a suitable portrayal of the protagonist. The most satisfying thing is that the character development of the single heroine is also good, there is no bloody plot, and the appearance of the heroine did not make the book collapse. (Is it possible that dirty jokes are a tomato specialty? If you don't write them, will you be banned from the book? But it's okay, at least it's not that the girlfriend cheated and dumped the male protagonist before the beginning, and then all the female characters were hunched forward and backward, with a charming smile hanging from the corners of their mouths. It doesn't matter, I choose to be content with what I have.) [Sending Hearts]

I would like to ask the author what do you think of this novel? [Awkward laugh] I can't bear to give a low score [Huge face] In the words of this novel: "There are so many places to complain about, I don't know where to start." [Laughing and crying] I saw the live broadcast, the male protagonist said that there is a 50% chance that the opponent will guess correctly, but later it became a choice of one out of ten... There are many poisonous points like this. I hope the author's future works will be better. The content is quite good. I'll run away first, I'm not Shennong [laughing]

Punishment! Is this a short play or a murder video? Stray cat The plot is quite interesting, there are many similar themes, and the writing has a different feel, at least it's not so cliche. The image of the characters is also much better than that of a novice novel. Although it is inevitable that there will always be a policewoman and the like, the writing is more detailed and a bit artistically exaggerated, but it is also relatively three-dimensional. Four to five stars, new book seedlings, rounded up.

I read a few chapters and read the comments, but no one could tell me why the book was good. I have a question. If the school announces expulsion, will the school not bear any consequences? No compensation? The protagonist doesn't take it seriously either? Some people in the comments said that the police's IQ is online. IQ online can tell how you kill people. Your video exposed you killing people (that's not the original statement, but this is the meaning)

I really like the timeline chart. It's often a little confusing when reading novels. It would be much better to have a picture to help sort it out. Like~ It might be better if it is divided into a little more detail? (The above is my personal opinion~)

After the author commented and liked it, I read more and got better again. It's better to re-write a review to support the new book. The previous part is about a small reversal of the slap in the face and the attitude of the protagonist. It seems wrong. The protagonist can ignore it, but the author can ignore it if it is shown in the detailed description, because normal people will not care about anything after being aggrieved. Since the reversal is written, it should have the appearance of a reversal. There is no sense of revocation, so For normal logic, no one will pay attention to this. If the protagonist does not get fame or fortune after being wronged, as a reader, I will not feel comfortable watching it anyway, because this is the route chosen by the author, but there are some details later. At least many passerby NPCs will know about it, and it will feel much better.

Author, please listen to me. Your novel is not decorated with gorgeous language, but touches readers with its ordinary true feelings. The sentences are fluent and coherent, and the psychological portrayal and detailed description are perfect, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the selection of materials is very novel, the angles are clearly visible, and the language is plain yet elegant. It is concise and full of meaning, and it can be called a model article! This novel shows extraordinary literary skills in its plainness. The psychological description of the hero and heroine is described to the extreme in plain sentences, reaching a height that is beyond our reach. From an artistic point of view, this novel still needs improvement, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. After reading your novel, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time. How could there be such a penetrating novel in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world." After reading the novel, I dare not comment easily, I am afraid that my vulgar language will tarnish this rare article in the world. But I still commented, because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful novel, it would be a regret in my life. Please forgive my selfishness! No matter how gorgeous the words are, they cannot describe the wonderfulness of this novel. So at the end, I just want to say: Your novel is really wonderful, why not update ten more chapters [laughing evilly] I copied it

Hmm... I think there is no need to bring the various skills arranged by the male protagonist to a super level. For example, if you max out the forensic skills, wouldn't that be a disguised form of undermining the role of the forensic Lolita? There is no need to be worth hundreds of billions, as this will make people feel that the male protagonist is separated from the people around him. The ordinary detective at the beginning is very good, the criminal investigation logic is first-rate, and there are other characters elsewhere that can complement each other. I think this is good.

To be honest, I don't know when smooth sentences, smooth plots, and rigorous logic have become the standards of a good book, but I have to say that this book has achieved all of them, so go for it! The author. Just do it

It's very beautiful, but you can only watch it during the day because it will scare you to death at night [face covering]

IQ is online. The tight pace is a good thing, but it is a bit too tight. Other than that, there are no shortcomings. As for the comments about the number of women, I don't understand. There can't be female police officers and female forensic doctors in this world, right? The female police officer has a single female protagonist, and the female forensic doctor is a female supporting role. There will be a campus girl and her best friend later because the male protagonist's brother likes that best friend. She has no interaction with the protagonist. I don't understand why I insist on this point. Isn't it normal to have women in the world😅They don't chase the protagonist and pester him to death😅

This is a new craftsman among writers! When I read this novel, I just listened to the song and heard the song "Blue and White Porcelain". The structure is like a group portrait. If I want to read more deeply and understand it, I should read the famous book "Water Margin". The prefix "" even... Read the comments on this review before posting a new review

It's great. It's the first time I've seen such a character for the male protagonist. He usually looks like a clear and stupid obedient college student. Unexpectedly, he was a school bully in high school, the kind of invincible opponent in the city. The gangsters avoided him, but in college his eyes became clear and stupid. He was usually shrewd, rational and calm when he helped the police solve crimes, but in normal times... I really can't imagine how the male protagonist can quickly switch between clear and stupid and shrewd and capable. I always say that it was the male protagonist's contradictory personality that attracted me to read this novel.

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The early stage is very exciting, the comedy and the case are progressing simultaneously. However, after the protagonist leaves Shanhe Province and goes outside, the relaxed and funny atmosphere decreases, the tension increases obviously, the case becomes more difficult and the writing becomes more complicated, making it not as comfortable to read as before. After that, the article started to feel a bit watery. Although I could feel that the plot was developing steadily, I could always feel the watery part. Secondly, there is the issue of names. I was listening to a book for a while, and the three names in the last comment were repeated hundreds of times like a curse. I almost wanted to slap the author.

I have a very sincere suggestion for the author. I feel that your style is more two-dimensional, like writing fan fiction, especially the communication between characters. It is more suitable for the behavior of some characters with distinct personalities in comics and animations, but it is very strange when used in novels, because the characters are based on our own imagination, and it is difficult to imagine three-dimensional people in a two-dimensional style. I hope the author will change it

It is a pure detective reasoning type, and it is particularly well combined with modern technology.

Come to think of it, I didn't write a book review! I will write book reviews for books that can be read twice, because if they are good, they must be said. The excellence of this book lies in the author's strong sense of space in writing. Each case can be imagined in the mind at that time and place, giving people the motivation to read it in one go. The review of the book is about love, regardless of the hero. I hope there will be a second part of this book, because I still want to see Mr. Lu solve the case (I always feel that there is an old case that should be discussed below). This guy is an out-of-the-box protagonist. The whole case of one or two years cannot fully display his talents. He should continue to work hard to shine and shine in the world! ! [Laughing]

The author is pretty good. When I first saw the interrogation section, I immediately had a big question: Why can a rookie detective interrogate a person alone? Later I found out that they were actually two people, and also learned about the current situation of this criminal investigation team. The previous interrogation of the newcomers is not a poisonous point, but a sideways description of the current situation of the current criminal investigation team. Some people think that these explanations are long-winded, but they are not. These explanations are direct descriptions of the current criminal investigation team. They are combined with the direct and indirect descriptions of the previous interrogation situations of the new officers to write out the current situation of one old detective and several new detectives. There are also flaws. There are still more front-line police officers such as criminal police officers, but there is no problem in this area. As for literary works, it would be better to write this way. This is also the difference between literary creation and poisonous points.

School incident: Principal Li resigned, the first batch of 100,000 yuan in entrepreneurial funds (there will be more later.) Characters: Jiang Haiming and Lin Tianzong can be compared to Lestrade in "Sherlock Holmes" and the Mountain Village Police Department in "Conan". They are funny characters. Liu Jinzhou, Zhou Shuwu, and Meng Zhiyi are orthodox characters

I have read Chapter 43. It seems pretty good so far. I really like the manufacturing ability! The plot is also good! However, chapters 22-27 are too long and not interesting, so I skipped them. I will give the author 5 stars for the rest!

I'm used to good reviews, but I like watching movies without cp [laughing and crying]

[Chigua] I think the third junior sister of the Drama Club Shu Dao is more suitable for the protagonist. It's not appropriate for work to overlap with life. The emotional scenes don't have to be too blunt. You can also write some to adjust the plot, and film a drama with the junior sister to adjust the entertainment live broadcast topic.

It's very interesting to watch, the plot is very compact, especially the timeline is very clear. Come, the author read with me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night. Deponent: XXX

First give me a five-star review~ It is a very good-looking criminal investigation novel about solving crimes. The story is rigorous, the methods of committing crimes are not particularly outrageous, and each case is very novel. There is no harem plot, the male protagonist's character is also very vivid, and there are not many emotional scenes with the female protagonist. It is mainly about cases. The full text is composed of individual small cases. There is no so-called major case throughout the text. The cases are very compact and there are few descriptions of life scenes. There is a system in the article, but the sense of existence is extremely low. The cool writing style is all in the early chapters, such as some of the author's skills; but in the later stages, it basically focuses on solving crimes, and the system has almost no effect.

Not bad, but it's not cp-free. It's a pity. I hope it's less pornographic. Come on!

This is worthy of the IQ online article

How should I put it? I have only read more than 100 chapters, but from what I have seen, the reasoning of the case, the investigation of the scene, etc., It can be seen that the author has checked a lot of information, the plot is relatively rigorous, and there are basically few poisonous points. As for why I say "only", it's just that I found this type of novel is not suitable for me after the novelty is over. Judging from the content I have read, I can give this book a score of about 9.2, That's it.

Although there are some flaws, the flaws are outweighed. On Tomato, why would you want it for free? This book is generally acceptable to old bookworms.