In Another World, I Became the Valkyries' Instructor

The following comments are subjective comments, please be careful before commenting: The book is well developed, but the details need to be worked out. The opening chapter has a strong Japanese comic style. Whether it is the daily description of the protagonist or the configuration of the heroine, the shadow of Japanese comics can almost be seen. The light novel-style development and not compact rhythm make the full text progress more naturally. The author also arranges the foreshadowing of the climax in a reasonable way, which can be read. However, the daily update speed has interrupted the accumulation of unpleasant plot emotions, and the chapters that should have a sense of substitution lack continuous reading, resulting in a weak sense of immersion. Secondly, the place where the book is cut also makes readers less excited about the upcoming plot, and the connecting points of the article chapters need to be considered. The details include whether there is backfilling of the plot laid out in the early stage, and the integration of the characters' small movements to create a more complete person. In my opinion, the author's foreshadowing was incomplete, that is, he did not think about the backfilling part in the later stage, so there was no explanation at all in the early stage, rather than a big chess game. When all the truth came out, I could sigh, "So this is how it should be." The ending of Master O. Henry was unexpected and reasonable. The author might be able to think more carefully about the big moves he has made. In the book, the author is everything and controls all directions. He should have God's consciousness, overview the overall situation, fill in the details, and fill the context. Let's talk about roles again. The characters in the book are shaped from multiple angles. The protagonist in the author's eyes, the instructor in the eyes of the five team members, and the partner in the eyes of friends are not their opinions of the character, but will be transformed into the character image and become the readers' opinions. Through different language combinations, a protagonist is formed, a protagonist that makes it easy for the author to write, and a protagonist that makes readers comfortable. Mystery and wisdom always fascinate people. People's original emotion is curiosity. When they clicked on this book, it was because they were curious about the content. When they left this comment, it was because they were curious about the plot. The most important thing about a character is to arouse the reader's curiosity, and mystery is undoubtedly the most seductive source of curiosity. As a positive image, the protagonist we hope is not only mysterious, but also intelligent. We may not understand his actions and words for the time being, but there will definitely be a plot that allows us to understand him and understand his wisdom. The protagonist in the British drama Doctor Who has always had a heart of charity, a desire for knowledge, a unique acting style that makes people want to contact him, and even though he is embarrassed, he is still elegant. Every detail that makes up him makes people motivated to continue watching. This may be the reason why this story has not ended sixty years ago. This book is undoubtedly good. We all hope to see the protagonist change. In today's fast-paced world, a growth-oriented protagonist still has his audience. This does not refer to those who have a bad start but have a golden finger to directly reach the sky; but a fundamental change, the growth of his character, and the stability of his actions, so that we can see his changes. Let him, who is wise, reliable, and strong, with a one-thousandth chance of survival, always see the "one" in the molecule, lead the team to create their own story in a world where natural disasters are rampant. Finally, I would like to thank the authors and fellow readers who have read this. We have witnessed and grown together. I also hope that readers can use their ink and ink to criticize Fang Qiu in the following creations, boldly write what they think in their hearts, and present us with a beautiful piece of text and an interesting story. This is my first long review after reading a book for so long. Naturally, I still need to update it. Author, please update it quickly!

Let me talk about the conclusion first. I read the latest chapter from the beginning in a week, and there is no big poison in the whole (soul penetration is actually a poison, but it is acceptable). The character of the male protagonist in the latest chapter is still relatively good. The writing in the early stage is slightly worse but the problem is not big. The emotional writing is also good, and there is also the matter of Xiao Liu Bei. There are also some shadows of game characters in the shaping of the heroine, and I am playing it, so it is a bit of a filter. On the body, the comprehensive recommendation index is 4.5 Stars. Now let's talk about the problems: the plot is too slow. The author has been saying that the protagonist has been killed again and again, but we have reached the latest chapter, and there is still no shadow of the protagonist (the power of the Titan, two mecha fragments are possible). There are many holes dug, and I don't know when they will be filled. Then there is the emotional interaction of the heroine, which is a bit of a female channel. So I can only give 4.5 Stars. Poison point index: 1 star Reading quality: 4.5 Stars Emotional shaping: 4.3 Stars Plot advancement: 3 stars Final conclusion: A book suitable for reading, you can put your brain away properly. I hope the author will increase the update speed and the plot rhythm. It will be considered as the most popular part in most of Tomato's books.

It's good to read, but this book has only more than 200 chapters since it was updated in 24 years, and no one seems to have given this book gifts. The author definitely has no motivation to continue writing. I just want to know if the author will write it to the end @Bob loves to sing

So far, it's not bad. I don't know why the protagonist didn't kill the traitor. It's too poisonous.

Cool stories, harem, daily life, mecha, war. The male protagonist's character is relatively "innocent" in the early stage, but it begins to change in Chapter 70. If you can't accept it, you can jump directly to Chapter 70, and the rest of the writing is okay.

I really enjoyed reading this book. I would be very happy if the author could update it once or twice a day. I would be very happy if it could be updated to the end. I understand that the current situation has suddenly stopped updating. I saw on XX that it has been updated to 800 chapters. I wonder if there is a limit on Tomato.

It looks good, Xingqing is really cute, and I still feel that Qianqian is not dead [thinking]. By the way, won't the male protagonist awaken the "Valkyrie" [sneaky laugh]

It's still very interesting to watch. This plot of conquering Valkyrie reminds me of the feeling of playing GalGame games before. However, if the male protagonist only flirts and doesn't do anything, he can only start with two stars.

Not bad, the author works hard to update! The future is promising! [Blowing kiss]

Update once a day? How dare you? Hurry up ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! !