Quick Transmigration: Heartbreak Collection at 100%

I think the content is very novel, but can there be less monologues about the original owner being bullied when he was bullied by others? Because I think that since the original owner has been replaced and is a very powerful person, those pitiful inner monologues do not actually need to exist. On the contrary, I think there should be more words that can see through everything. Because I think the original owner looks very scared on the surface, so his inner monologue and descriptive narration should have more dismissive entries, instead of still describing how pitiful he is. This makes me feel like there is no replacement, and it doesn't seem to have a sense of satisfaction. For example, in Chapter 59, Ouyang Yi comforted the original owner after he was beaten. The original owner also said that he was fine, but there were three paragraphs describing how pitiful the original owner was and why he was so misunderstood. People who once trusted him are now standing on the opposite side of him. Moreover, these three paragraphs were not spoken by the original owner. I don't know if this is a monologue or a narration, but since this is a bit It is equivalent to a heroine drama. I think there should be more contrast between the heart and the appearance. For example, after he is beaten, he pretends to be okay on the surface and is pitiful, but in the heart he should say "Doesn't it hurt? Come and try." Such a contrast makes me feel much better. After reading this book, I feel that the original owner is still the same, and I don't feel the pleasure of revenge at all.

A classic within a classic, the first world has a strong flavor of ancient novels, and I think it's a bit slow as a fast-travel novel. The heroine is quite immersed in it at the moment, and I hope she can become a unique beauty soon, and slap all the men in the face. It's not easy for the author to give four stars (◍•ᴗ•◍)

Look good, come on💪I'm optimistic about you [laughing]

It's so beautiful. Why is it gone? [Crying] The author will update it soon [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

Traveling through the world, half of the first world doesn't feel like it has passed. There are already 77 chapters. If you write 150 chapters this way, you may not be able to get to the physical abuse and psychological abuse later. It's good. Otherwise, 1000 chapters will be a small world. I just want to write a few more chapters so that readers can read it.

The author has a lot to say about this book. First of all, the female protagonist is tortured too much. I admit that doing it this way will attract people, linking each link to attract readers. It is very satisfying to just rely on the female protagonist to abuse her heart and body, and then reverse the abuse of the male protagonist, but it is very frustrating. The author can consider the heroine's self-improvement and want the heroine to become the sun instead of the dim moonlight (the author wants to write about diplomats who should not be limited to personal emotions but focus on the national interests), and in turn reject the male protagonist and make the male protagonist sad and regretful. The various reversals in the first world are also very good and make people want to watch it. Anyway, the random flowers are becoming more charming, and everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. The author's own article is intended to torture the male protagonist. If you don't like it, don't spray it.

The heroine is so aggrieved. She wants to know immediately how the male protagonists will react when they learn the truth. The plot is very interesting. I just like watching the heroine's scheming and weak acting throughout. All in all, I highly recommend it. I hope the author can update it soon. [Blowing kiss]

Can the ending of the next world be changed? Can they be made to regret it before the heroine dies? If the heroine dies first and they regret it later, it won't feel good. Let them know the truth and then regret it, and then want to compensate the heroine, but the pain in the heroine's heart cannot be erased, and then the heroine pretends to forgive them and give them some warmth, and finally commits suicide. Only those who have experienced warmth can better move toward despair.

Gone? ? ? Ahhhhhhhh! ! !

The writing is very good, but the heroine is very aggrieved. The original protagonist died because of this bullying. As a result, the heroine has to experience the original protagonist's experience again and then take revenge. It is really uncomfortable to watch.