Origin-Drawn Cultivator

The writing is good, except for the poor talent. The characters are all full-bodied, and their IQs are all online at the moment.

It's very beautiful. There are very few works like this among traditional fairy tales and fantasy. The characters are clearly depicted and the plot is great. The author writes well and I will always support it! I recommend everyone to watch it, it's really good. In the first hundred chapters, the author writes like a novice, like a fledgling high school student writing. After a hundred chapters, the writing style becomes different and becomes more and more beautiful, which shows that the author's writing level has improved, and at the same time, the foreshadowing and reversal of the plot have also been strengthened. One hundred and fifty chapters later, he is already on par with normal authors. Dear author, keep up the good work! Write a better plot [blowing kiss][admiration]

The pace of the first hundred or so chapters is very slow and the writing is average, but after a hundred chapters it starts to get exciting. As Shi Chen's cultivation level increased, he went from living a subsistence life to being on the front desk, which is indeed a normal state of ordinary people's cultivation. The plot development is okay, and the characterization is also remarkable. I hope the author can write more exciting stories [Love] [Like]

The male protagonist enters the world of immortality by mistake, and uses his spiritual roots to start his own legendary path to immortality. He was determined and persevering all the way, never giving up for a moment. Very sensible, with ups and downs of content. Support

The main character in the book, Shi Chen, has a clear distinction between love and hate. He is decisive in dealing with problems. Before a hundred chapters, you can tell that the author is a novice. After a hundred chapters, his writing skills have improved a lot. After a hundred and fifty chapters, he has become comparable to someone with two or three years of writing experience. Mortal Flow is a rare and good work in traditional fantasy. The characters are vividly drawn, the plot twists and turns, and the road to invincibility in the realm begins in about two hundred pictures. There are more than a dozen slaps in the face, all presented in the author's writing. It's a book I really love to read, cheers to the author! [Like][Like][Like]

There is no golden finger for ordinary people to cultivate immortality, nor is it omnipotent. When it comes to being more interesting, it always feels that it is too easy to obtain, and the sense of accomplishment is not that high. Moreover, the author has a great imagination, good writing style, and five-star praise.

It is a very good novel with rich content. I can't stop reading it. I read it through once to read this novel. It is worth reading. The author is very attentive and has captured every detail very well. I highly recommend it.

It's a very interesting fantasy about cultivating immortals. The male protagonist has gone through countless hardships from being a mortal to becoming a Nascent Soul. You are lucky and get many great opportunities, but you can also easily get into trouble. The author, please give me a lot of encouragement and hurry up and let Shi Chen ascend to immortality! Looking forward to the follow-up...

This book is so classic. I read it for more than ten hours at a time and still haven't had enough. I hope the author will work harder and write more exciting stories. This book is different from those Tomato books and is worth reading.

Is the author the master of Happy Vest? I feel like your writing technique is so delicate! Both the protagonist and the supporting characters are very vividly described, and the story has a tight rhythm, making people feel like they can't stop!