The Farmer’s Eldest Sister-in-Law Is Alluring

The male and female protagonists are okay, but the language is a bit stiff. Many plot characters appear suddenly, and the pace of the plot is a bit fast. There are many misunderstandings that can be resolved in just one chapter. Although the female protagonist is a straightforward person, it is a bit strange to rush to the male protagonist and outsiders to question him. And there are several chapters in which the male partner stays overnight. Although the heroine is a time traveler, in ancient times, we should pay more attention to the protection between men and women. The male protagonist is not at home, and the female protagonist is alone in the house. She says it is not safe and asks the male partner to stay. It's hard to comment on the fact that the heroine also took the male partner out to dig wild vegetables with the villagers. Emmmm

I really can't give too much, it's too far away from the uncle-sister-in-law literature I think. The male protagonist can almost only stand up to his character in the first chapter, but he can't stand it at all later on. He holds hands, hugs and wipes sweat from his sister-in-law (I can understand this, but the female protagonist is more dizzy) ), and the female protagonist was okay at first, but she was very stupid and sweet in front of the male protagonist (there are many plots that are completely inconsistent with the character before the time travel. Although it is okay to have a drastic change in temperament after death, her own vision, knowledge, skills, etc. Are all exposed to the male protagonist at once. In front of me, it's still that silly and sweet way to expose). The main essence of uncle-sister-in-law literature should be a little bit taboo. It's hard to evaluate the heroine who has traveled through time. After all, it's difficult to assume the identity of the sister-in-law. At most, the hero is raised as a child, but the hero is a native. You should keep a distance at all times. Even those male protagonists who have no regard for secular ethics should be the kind of bad guys who secretly rub elbows. Generally speaking, this should not be the way the male and female protagonists get along with each other now. With only a dozen chapters, even if it is not an uncle-sister-in-law novel, it feels like the pace is too fast and there is no grasp of it. It may be a bit offensive to the author, so I would like to apologize first. It is really not a malicious negative review, it is just a personal opinion. The author should first stick to the logic of his own story. If you are really uncomfortable, you can comment and delete it.

After reading a few chapters, let's retreat.