The Origin of the Apocalypse: Soul Engraving

My friends around me have Amway, and it seems to be okay, at least for now. Generally speaking, the flaws do not hide the merits (I still have a bit of tolerance for new authors) Bless you and keep writing, you still have great potential. The revised chapters are better. I feel like you are more suitable for writing in this style.

Add 0.5🌟 If you are acquainted with the author The author listened and added 0.5🌟 New authors add 0.5🌟 From the perspective of the novel itself, the plot is passable, the details are sufficient, and the foreshadowing is qualified. Getting a 3.5🌟 Is already a good performance. There is also potential for subsequent plot development. It is a leisure read worth looking forward to.

What's more, after reading these, when the latest Slave comes out, it will feel like a comparison between the city and the common people's area. It will definitely look good! Although the writing style is a bit immature, maybe because Si Er is still a novice, I can get the feeling I want to express, so keep up the good work. I think you can make it. The five stars represent my respect for you, Ruisi.

Compared with the previous one, this one is really thoughtful. As for the two lines between the city and the common people, I feel like they are trying to hide something, so I won't comment on it for now. But I have a doubt about the protagonist. Now that the protagonist has awakened, what level is his current strength? It seems I haven't explained this yet~~ I hope I am strong enough to protect my sister~! Looking forward to the follow-up updates, I feel that Dong Ge's line is still being explored, it should be exciting!

It's a lot of fun to read. I feel like it's interesting to occasionally read such humane articles. I hope the author can strengthen the protagonist. So far, I feel that it's still too weak. I may have my own ideas. Anyway, I hope it can continue to be updated. I will also keep chasing. I will leave you a message for love. It's not easy for a new author to write like this. Come on!

After reading a little bit, I think it's pretty good for a first-time novel writer, so I'd better keep working hard! One more thing, don't stop updating. I really want to see Dong Ge's follow-up.

I watched them all in one go. To be honest, the plot development was interesting. Although we can only see the gap separated by a wall now, there should be many cities like this, right? I wonder if other cities have the same class differences, or is each city different? I feel like I have to continue reading the author's writing to find out. At least for this Blackwater City, the foreshadowing is enough. Is it time for the author to push for the climax? People outside the wall compete with each other, plus people in the city are fighting each other, look forward to it. Another question, are there any zombies here? What are tides?

Except for the protagonist, everyone else has a different description of their personality. It can be seen that the author wrote it carefully.

How to describe it? I feel very happy as I keep reading and follow the plot. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into the main plot, but there are too few chapters, so I will keep it for now.