The God-Making Orphanage

First time writing a book! It's not too much to give yourself 5 points! (Confidently)

Fans of slow-burning books won't be popular if you don't have a basic foundation. It's a good book. Just practice your skills on the first one. It's better to write a little more clearly in the early stage and don't give too much foreshadowing. Well, I don't recommend writing a long book for the first one. Come on [code]

I just read four chapters and I think the subject matter is quite good. There are just too few chapters, I hope the author can work harder and be more attentive. Lots of updates!

The subject matter is okay and I can read it! Keep up the good work! There is too little written. In fact, the author can refine the previous chapters. What you write now is obviously better than at the beginning... Are you a developing author?

It's okay. As a newcomer's book, it's of a decent level. I'll give you five stars first and see if you continue writing.

Not bad. As a first book, I can see that the author has a lot of ideas.

The content of the work is very attractive👍👍Continue reading...