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Great support for the author, the article is clearly organized, the story is humorous, and the author is very imaginative. So far, it is very interesting (~￣▽￣)~

The ideas are good and the writing is okay. I hope I can stick to it and finish it.

The writing is good, and the plot is okay, but it is a harem story. If you like a single female protagonist, you should hesitate, but it is okay to watch. After all, if you ignore the other female protagonists, it is okay to read it as a single female protagonist, but I don't think you have this strange ability.

It is really a rare good book on Tomato. After reading about half of it, I immediately gave it a thumbs up. The author has ideas and pursuits, and is very careful when writing. There are almost no logical loopholes, and the rhythm of the writing is very comfortable. It is much better than those studio books. I have read online articles for many years, and recently I have searched through a lot of books on Tomato. This book is really recommended. I hope the author can keep writing. Come on.

It's pretty cool, tell me why. In the early stage, it was a standard cool novel, but later it transformed into a real novel and creation, with flesh-and-blood characters, emotional supporting characters, indescribable relationships, etc. I have to say that it is very attractive. Of course, there are also shortcomings, which are quite obvious. There is a lot of inner drama in this book, and the author narrates most of it in the third person, which obviously cannot be as natural and sincere as in Leo Tolstoy's Resurrection. This is a bit abrupt and somewhat redundant, but there are advantages. It is explained very thoroughly, but it takes the trouble to talk about one thing again and again, repeating the foreshadowing of the last time, and then pushing it a little further, and the cycle starts again. Like the story of the Yu family and the grievances of the historians, the impression is ordinary. Generally speaking: there is a pearl in the tomato sea, and its beauty cannot be concealed by its flaws. The author is so updated!

After reading the first volume, I feel very satisfied. The author's narration is unhurried and slow. Although sometimes a little wordy, the language is precise and there is no habit of abusing exclamation marks by most authors today. In addition, it can be seen from the inside that the author has a lot of foreshadowing before writing, the plot is smooth and the characters have distinct personalities, making it a masterpiece. Ah! Author, I love it! ! But why are there so few? I hate it! Ahhhhhhhhhh! ! ! It's almost as short as my winter vacation. I, I feel pain! I just finished chasing (660) and school is about to start. Is this fate? Ah, I, I, I love it! But it's the last four months of the college entrance examination, and I probably won't be able to catch up. Does this mean I have no points? I hate it! Meow Beibei, you must wait for me, ah [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

To be honest, the writing style of this book is good and the organization is relatively clear, but there is a big problem in the early stage. The protagonist has received too many inexplicable attacks. Although I understand that the author wants to use contradictions to advance the development of the plot, some of the targeting of the protagonist is too deliberate and unreasonable, which is a bit disappointing. But it can be considered a good article in Tomato. Please give it five stars to encourage it.

The content is rich, and the title of the book is a bit too sexy, in a Tomato style. However, the author's skills are profound and his literary quality is not ordinary. He cannot be said to be top-notch, but he can be worthy of the word "excellent". I am personally optimistic about the quality of the novel. I have read a lot of novels of different genres. Excluding genre comparison, logic, plot, foreshadowing, shaping... Etc., They are all excellent! The tension is mixed with relaxation, the depression is mixed with humor, and the driving level is superb. Well! I am just a reader, and I racked my brains to encourage the author! Would you like to send me some money?

Looks good, really looks good. It's really good that the author tried to enrich the story of the characters and supporting characters later on, which is better than some novels where they just brush off the supporting characters. However, the stories of the characters are not well connected. It may be a bit abrupt due to lack of foreshadowing in the previous chapters. But I prefer that the character inadvertently evokes his past stories in the plot. I feel that it looks very comfortable this way, and each character appears to be very full and the plot is richer. I like it. I'm just telling you how I feel. If you don't like it, please be gentle🙏🙏🙏

The plot is quite interesting. The male protagonist is very self-aware and does not waste time in fighting or give others a chance. The most interesting thing is that the heroine is capable and smart, but she can't escape by pretending to be a woman. The interaction between the two is very interesting, summary, good-looking, love to read, please update soon!