Becoming a God Through High Martial Arts: My Diary Can Rewrite the Past

It's very well written, but a bit short.

Goldfinger is very perverted. It mainly depends on the author's imagination. If you dare to give it, it will be an upgrade story. You can basically treat the protagonist as Emperor Ye Tian. If you dare to give it, it will be an invincible story. Let me do it. I have a hundred ways to make the protagonist directly invincible and become Gu Chensha [please take a closer look]

It's nice to read, and there's no fancy language. I like to read the type of article. I hope the author will write more, with strict logic. The structure is clear, and the title attracted me. The language of the article is plain and simple, concise and easy to understand, and it attracts people's imagination. I suggest you add more descriptions of the environment, so that you can be immersed in the situation. PS: The main topic is a reading question that I have been doing for a long time. Now when I read and write the article, the first thought that comes to my mind is appreciation. The second thought is: description of the environment, throughout the whole text, what kind of atmosphere is set off... Well, I have no words. In order to show that I have literary talent, I decided to attach my own summary of appreciation methods (3 excerpts) (Note: It is not applicable to all, it needs to be combined with specific analysis) ①The role of clues The article uses "..." As a clue + summarizes the content of the article + runs through the whole text; the logic is strict and the structure is compact, making the article coherent; the side highlights the main idea of "..."/Strengthens the main idea of the article and sublimates the theme of the article ②The role of the title Explain the object/place/time/… of the writing of the article; set up suspense to attract readers' interest in reading; introduce the following and pave the way for the following… to make the context of the article clear; point out the main purpose of the article and sublimate the theme of the article. ③The function of the first paragraph (the last paragraph is reversed) The title at the beginning of the chapter refers to the title; it controls the entire article and guides the rest of the article; it connects the previous and the following and leads to the rest of the chapter; it exaggerates the atmosphere and sets the tone; it highlights the theme and adds the finishing touch.

It's okay. Once the word count comes up, there should be more people.

I feel like the previous one is pretty good. Maybe it's because I don't have that much demand for a male protagonist in a video. I think as long as the protagonist is strong, it's fine. As long as there aren't too many villains that exceed his strength and cause harm to him, I don't care so much. As long as he's strong. However, I highly recommend speeding up the protagonist's upgrade speed! And hang! Turn it up! They are all time travellers! Souls can pass through space cracks and reach other worlds, so it shouldn't be upgraded so slowly! More than 100 chapters and still first level! I just want the next one to be bigger. Also, there can be female characters, but please don't have weird and ambiguous plots, and the appearance rate shouldn't be too high. This will make people uncomfortable and have the feeling of a harem novel.

Come on, author! I feel like the writing is pretty good, and it's quite in line with my preferences. But I found that several of the author's books seemed to have no scores, and this one only had a score of six points. Others don't even have ratings. But I feel that the writing is quite good, and the author is an experienced one. I also read the next book. I hope the author will continue to work hard and he will achieve results if he persists.

My comments are at the end of the book, so I won't repeat them. In short, I recommend reading this. There are quite a few bad points, but there are no big problems. How come this kind of book only has a 6.3 Rating? Okay, maybe I'm okay, maybe I'm the only one who likes it [thinking]

Not bad, but the number of words is too few and not enough to read. [Full] [full] [full]

The author wrote it very well, but could he change the sword technique to sword technique?

Is there a female protagonist? If there is more or less, the one who heals the Lin family will still be the Purple World.