Naruto: This Is a Tailed Beast

No matter what, the writing style is definitely good. It feels good. Although it's different from what I imagined, it's still good.

Infatuated demon, please wait another life

Very, very, very beautiful! ! ! The author updates frequently! ! ! ! ! ! !

The first 20 chapters are short, but they make a perfect start for the whole book. They record the life of Hui Li accompanying Yuyi, Indra, and Asura. I really feel the brevity of life and death in it. By the way, the middle chapter of the male protagonist who changed the world of Naruto should be written in detail.

The author's writing style is very good and the plot is very novel. I have never seen this type of Naruto story before. The shortcoming is that there are too few. I finished it in a short time.

It's very good to read, and the emotional aspects are well written. I finished reading it in less than a day. The CP is Madara, but the thing that moved me to tears the most was Indra's words "I like you" when he died of old age. The life span theory is very difficult to understand. The characterization is also very good. Although it may be different from the original work, this is the charm of the fandom∽, so it is still recommended to watch it😋

Overall, it's good, and the plot control is moderate. The main thing is that each character is very unique. Among all the novels of the same type that I have read, your emotional line is really well written and not obtrusive to me. However, I feel that the Warring States period is a bit less written. After all, the protagonist is Madara, but it is understandable in order to promote the plot. I hope that the male protagonist can return to the factory in the future. I hope the author will get better and better, but don't be lazy (touch your head)

There are many problems with the subsequent branch plot. First, as far as I know, Madara should start the fight first and use illusions during the fight. Second, the illusion technique is not a puppet technique. It cannot directly control the body. It only disrupts chakra and makes people hallucinate. It is effective against tailed beasts because tailed beasts are composed of chakra. There is no effective countermeasure. However, the protagonist has aura and should not be affected. No matter what, he will not be unable to control his body on the spot. Third, when Madara came out, he wanted to accompany the protagonist forever, and then he stopped looking for the protagonist? After controlling Kyuubi, I heard the protagonist's voice. If I can't find anyone when I go back, shouldn't I first suspect Kyuubi? Fourth, Kyuubi was awake when the two of them fought in the Valley of the End. At least after Akira Madara died, he must have had time to change into a human. Fifth, the Kyuubi can talk to the Jinchuuriki while it is sealed. The seal will definitely not be wrapped in chains. It can definitely move, and he can probably see what the Jinchuuriki sees, at least it is not a small dark room. In short, if you ignore these, the writing is not bad.

Not bad, not bad. I also want to read the literature of the era of Asura and Indra. The CP is spotty and the writing is quite good. I don't know if it is OOC or not. I am just a reader who loves to read fan fiction (the plot setting of the fan fiction is relatively complete. You will understand it after reading it a few times [Send my heart])

I was killed by a knife. I didn't expect the final ending to be like this. Unexpectedly, loyal love, love is hate, love and hate, and mutual survival. I didn't expect that the entire ninja world would be gone in the end. I haven't seen this type of novel for a long time. In the end, the protagonist still failed to protect everything he wanted to protect. Everything was just a dream. Fortunately, the extra chapters later made up for a little bit of sadness, but false ones are just fake extra chapters. Alas, how sweet and funny the front is, there are so many swords in the back. I was a little caught off guard [crying] [crying] [crying] Even if the history of the entire ninja world is changed, it still can't change the invasion of Otsutsuki. The power of Gray Glass in the past life should be very powerful. After all, changing any future requires corresponding power and price, but it can be seen that it is very weak. If it changes, it will be pulled back on track by the will of the world. The one who divides and hates only made some small changes. This butterfly will not cause a big storm in the end [almost crying]