Transmigrated to Another World with a Portable Game

For now, it deserves a 5-star rating. The protagonist's mentality has grown through experience, and he is decisive in killing. I don't know if there will be CP. After all, the protagonist is a female protagonist, and I personally don't recommend CP.

I really like the exciting stories about the heroine. The golden finger is quite big, but not to the point where you are instantly invincible like in some stories. You can feel the bigness but it is appropriate. The progress is just right to make people feel happy all the time, and the plot is not out of line, and there is no such thing as a plot that does not end after dozens of chapters. Really like it It's a mess, don't read it, there's so much foreshadowing, the plot is halfway through, and the last chapter is the finale. The outline is more words than yours in one chapter.

So far, it looks very interesting and not toxic at all. It really has a game perspective and a strong sense of immersion. The most fearful thing about this kind of novel is that it will collapse. And it's easy to fall apart. I don't know when a game setting I wrote will finally be logically consistent with the subsequent chapters and never come back. Anyway, cheers for the author, it's quite interesting and I don't want it to collapse. The very interesting point is that the heroine does a lot of things for mission rewards and upgrades, and does not think that the heroine is a virgin or anything like that. This kind of setting is not easy to break the plot, but it is very easy to break the game setting. Moreover, the heroine is also very decisive and cautious, and will not bluff or act stupid or childish. Overall good. Come on, author, be careful not to crash the game settings.

It was quite interesting in the early stage, but later on it felt like the author wanted to end it quickly. The progress bar of the story was just halfway through, but it came to the end in a blink of an eye. There were still a lot of holes to fill in, and many of the foreshadowings in the early stage were not effective. I just finished it in a hasty stroke [I almost cried] It is worth reading. I suggest that you write a follow-up after reading it and send it to me in the book circle. (I have many ideas, but my writing skills are not good, so I can't write them [face covering]) Ahhhh w(ﾟДﾟ)w, the early writing is really good! ! ! Why did it end so hastily? ! ! [Cry][cry][cry]

I don't understand why the score is so low, but my writing is better than many scores of 9. The plot is compact and the plot is reasonable. The heroine's character is decisive and not like a virgin. It suits my taste very well. It's beautiful and deserves a five-star rating. The writing is very good and the plot is novel. But it is obvious that the cliffhanger ended quickly. What a pity ah ah ah ah

I have read the latest one, it is generally good, but the plot is not good, and it is a little bit poisonous. For example, there is no follow-up on the disposal of the items obtained from the mission, and there is also the cold-bloodedness and exploitation between people. That Wang Juan is really full of twists and turns. Fortunately, she is not always rewarded for being a "nanny". The same goes for that apprentice, tsk tsk, just using him. Fortunately, it feels better to think that the heroine is on a mission. It would be better if the gangs started to recruit people there to look better and feel a little bit more refreshed. Let me tell you something, this game system is really powerful

Beautiful, very beautiful! I want to ask if there is a male protagonist?

The pace is appropriate, the main plot is not sluggish, and there are no annoying embarrassing scenes so far. It fits the subject matter. It is one of the few articles of this type that I can continue to read. However, I feel that the characterization is a bit thin. I hope that there will be more character events in the follow-up to improve the character image. If the protagonist is a lone wolf, upgrade and change the map, just pretend that I didn't say anything. Finally, I'm urging you to update it. It's so good that if you like it, you'll want to read it again [Sending my heart]

It's so exciting for the heroine to travel through the past with the game system. Others have worked hard to practice. The heroine can upgrade as long as she completes the tasks released by the game. In the early stage, the heroine was a little trembling kind of person. She faced beings that were stronger than her. Fortunately, the game system upgraded quickly. She ran tasks while collecting garbage and decomposing it in the early stage. Finally, her realm improved greatly. When she first started to establish the gang, she took in Aunt Wang. I was not very happy. Later, the gang took in some people and watched the gang become more and more powerful. Very happy for the heroine I just didn't expect the ending to be so sudden. The villain was quickly defeated and that's the end. I haven't seen the heroine carry the gang forward yet.

Why is it so short😟? According to the previous rhythm, there should be at least a thousand chapters. Why is it so short😟The content is very good and the pace is well grasped. I also thought about saving up to read it. It took me a month to save more than a dozen chapters. I originally wanted to see if the author stopped updating, but please tell me it's finished🥴