A Soldier King Reborn in Another World, Cultivating Immortality from the Womb

Not bad, but don't exaggerate too much about the power of cultivating immortals. It can be inclusive, but it must also reflect the unique advantages of magic.

Bro, I give you five stars. It's not because you write well. But there are too few people writing about it. When I was a child, I felt like a hundred schools of thought were contending. What are the disadvantages here? Brother, you can learn from other fantasy novels. For example, fields, laws, sword intent, sword power, etc., And career issues are a continent at the same time. Even if they were all pigs, some of them would become sperm. Therefore, careers should also let a hundred flowers bloom. Of course, the main system must include warriors and mages. But subordinate branches, such as shooters. Potion master, formation mage, etc. Only in this way can a complete world view be written. At the same time, the levels of power are not equal, and some Western ones contain gods. In other words, this world is just the lowest world. Then it will be expanded from there to all the heavens and worlds, etc. I am just giving it as a suggestion. As for the rest, you need buddies, you can think of it yourself. Brother, write well and write with your heart!

After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, silently turned off my phone, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Nongfu Spring, held it tightly in my hand, and walked slowly to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy. Gradually, it started to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision was blurred. I don't know if it was me crying or the rain was getting heavier. It might be both. I My mood became even more melancholy, and I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. I opened the window and shouted out the window: Who am I looking down on in the next few chapters? (Author, your writing is very good, there is no need to update more, you can just keep updating five times a day)

Can we unify the titles? Sometimes father, sometimes father, it would be too disturbing to watch. Also, we could describe less about the power and magic of the protagonist's skills. We all know that the protagonist's own skills are powerful. Personally, I feel like this. If you like this kind of article, you can read it...

The content is compact, nothing rambling, I like it

Apart from anything else, the first few chapters are really well written, with a good historical background. The male protagonist's ability to become stronger is well-founded and reasonable, as long as the male protagonist is not a father-in-law [laughing], but it is best not to be a stallion, and the plot is also relatively detailed in Tomato, Tomato. Most of the articles are the kind that are full of nonsense articles. If the male protagonist is a father-in-law, I may downgrade four stars. But if the subsequent articles remain as well-written and detailed, I'm sorry to say that I don't want to use any female ones. It will only affect my reading speed [get it]

My favorite theme since I was a child is still this time-travel fantasy world. I started reading novels about mice bullying cats and then falling into the trap, and then reading miscellaneous travels in other worlds, and then some transformations into Behemoth, mosquitoes, and orcs. It's rare for Tomato to see this kind of subject, come on!

It's a good read, but it's too short.

I like this type of book very much. I just started reading it. I will review it after I read it.

The overall performance of this book is very good. There is no bloody plot in the book. Especially the family love is written very realistically. There is no intrigue. The other details are also in place, not to mention that the word count is not deliberately crammed. It is a good book worth collecting.