Everyone Just Awakened, and You're Already Crafting Superpower Weapons by Hand?

I am not an expert in this field, but I still want to comment. After I read your book carefully and thought about it for a long time, I actually don't know how to comment. As I said at the beginning, I am not an expert in this field.

How should I put it, the first paragraph of this novel still makes people very willing to read it. But since it starts with family, the relative text is a bit weak which makes it a bit uncomfortable. Plus. . Personally, I feel that at least the first few pictures made me feel uncomfortable with my sister's ideas. (Maybe I feel differently without a sister?) When it appeared, I thought it was a live broadcast by a family and they made all kinds of strange props and weapons. I was looking forward to it. . But I only lasted one. . . Personally, I think it's quite out of the ordinary for my sister to help me register for college. . . After finishing college, I went through it very sloppily, and I quickly took up the leadership position. . . It was as if I suddenly became a leader while singing this song while eating hot pot. . . Later, there are less and less descriptions of forging weapons. . . . There is only the continuous pursuit of blood with various powers. . . This book gave me the feeling that I was hitting a pole here and there. . After being attracted by the title of the book. . . It can't be said that the protagonist is selling equipment. I can only say that the protagonist is constantly buying equipment. . . An indescribable feeling. . . Very uncomfortable. . . Hope it gets better in the future. . .

If the brother doesn't want to break the news, just say so. Why bother to deal with the sister so casually? It seems that the sister is being sentimental. The brother is weak and needs more rest. The sister is urging the brother so much. It is the sister's fault. It hurts the brother's body and makes the sister feel distressed. Unfortunately, whether the brother hurts the body or not has nothing to do with the sister? Hurry up and add the update! Brother

There is fun in the ordinary. The description of the dynamic psychological activities of young people is very immersive. It can only be said that this is a novel with potential. The author is not a novice and has no major poisonous points. It is safe to eat. [Like][Like][Like] Why do you show that it took less than 30 minutes to read? Is it because I read the book too fast?

It's very beautiful, not bad, come on author

No, why didn't his sister tell his brother that he was bullied? He also called his sister a lady. A lady wouldn't give his brother a mouthful to tell him to get up. Just skip the process of your brother's revenge and just give him the result [face covering]

It's quite interesting, but when the teacher questioned the protagonist's talent for blacksmithing, why did he say he was proficient in combat? How could he explain that he wanted the blood of his classmates to give them special equipment?

Yes, the creative plot is very good. Also, why didn't the protagonist think of transferring the transformation of Transformers toys to the car? It should be possible. After all, even the elements can be transferred to the ring. There is no reason why Transformers can't.

The author is good at making jokes, and it is still unsystematic, and the character development is also very good. It is suitable to read when you are in a book shortage [laughing]

This book is more about daily life. The author updates it steadily in two chapters a day. The main character is not the Virgin, and there are various weapons. You can take a look at it.