White Impermanence: I Quit, So Why Is a Yandere Still Stalking Me?

The overall look and feel is very good! I really like Bai Cen as the protagonist. Later, the gentle version of Qiu He deceives Bai Cen's heart. Let's not talk about the outcome. In Bai Cen's words, if this is a dream, I hope this dream will be longer. I prefer to watch daily slapstick scenes, so I really like the scene where pantyhose are torn under the sunset. Using the corporate understanding of Zhengqin in the recently popular "Ellie's Classmate Next Door Who Always Speaks the Truth in Russian" (Tsundere turns out to be a spoiled brat after being arrogant?), Then can yandere be understood as spoiled after getting sick? Bai Cen is Qiu He's heart medicine 🤔

Finished reading! Uh-huh, I'm not very good at compliments, but anyway, it looks good, it looks good! But Qiu's yandere... I feel that the bad parts are too much, and the good parts are not enough, so it can be a bit annoying. For example, Qiu doesn't know anything about workplace bullying, and after the protagonist finished speaking, he didn't do anything befitting a yandere, such as beating them down and making them kneel down to apologize to the protagonist () Later, she found out that Minotaur Horse Face had beaten her when he bullied her for the second time, but it felt like Bai was beaten so badly by them, and they felt that they were beaten lightly. In short, there is no sense of security unique to yandere. Apart from the yandere herself, she will help you solve any troubles. This feeling, coupled with Qiu's other yandere behaviors, makes people feel that Qiu's dialogue is purely bad, so it is a bit annoying. However, the foreshadowing of the cognitive curse will become more understandable later on. Really, I was quite moved when Shangqiu on the Ferris wheel resisted the curse and punched himself. I hope the dialogue will be better later ()

Bai is too gentle, and I feel that Hei is a million points unworthy of her.

It's really good! The world view is very novel, and it can be self-explanatory, and there are no big problems, which is already very good! And I feel that this book is particularly suitable for animation, and the fragments at the end of each unit story are handled just right. It is simply a holy body of innate animation! I really like this book more and more the more I read it! In this follow-up review, I won't state the advantages one by one. I want to say something else. I have always thought that for a really good or really satisfying book, as the reading progresses, the reader's love for the book can extend to the author behind it. Just like the story of Once Upon a Time and Pinocchio (I have always read the Honkai Impact series as a book) In my opinion, this book is like this. Although the author's text is not top-notch, it can still be seen that the author wants to write something. The emotions and interpretation and thinking of the issues revealed between the lines are an impulse to write down what he wants to say and express what he is thinking. It is the throbbing of the three words "I want" in the heart, and this is romance. This kind of romance contains huge energy and can make readers who really love this book feel the resonance deep in their hearts with the three views expressed in the book. And the aftermath of this resonance stays in the heartstrings for a long time, giving people the strength to move forward. I prefer to call it "the power of development" Well, people who play with rice are indeed more likely to go crazy. Even so, the above words are all sincere (I guess we are the only ones who are willing to write long reviews and go crazy 🤦, to put it mildly, it is romantic [smile])

All plots related to Gabriel have been reset. Thank you readers for your valuable suggestions!! In my second book, there are still many unfamiliar places and places that I don't understand. Please read it and criticize it. If you are not satisfied with it, use @ to call the author, and I will correct it immediately!! (I'm very busy at work, so I'll make sure to update it every day, and focus on correcting errors on weekends. Some errors may not be corrected in time, so please understand.) I wish you all a happy viewing!! Some people felt that the heroine was too frustrated in the early stage, so I changed it slightly!

The writing is good, I finished reading it in 3 hours, but it was a bit abusive, because only Bai was hurt in the whole process. I hope Qiu can learn how to love Bai in the future.

This book is really good. First of all, the system setting about the underworld is very novel and reasonable, and then the character creation and background story are quite full and three-dimensional for a reader like me who has read nearly 2,000 books. Moreover, the overall transition and advancement of the book are also very coherent and unobtrusive. I personally feel that this book is already a good book that has the potential to hit the top of the list. [Learned][Understood]

Can the author be faster? I really like this book, and I sincerely hope that it will get better and better, but the only drawback is that the update speed is a little slow. I hope the author can go faster while maintaining good health. (I'm sorry, I hope the author can recognize the current affairs and be a hero. You should know what to do at the end~ If you don't meet my requirements, author, just wait [rolls eyes])

Great author! Your book is beautiful, but can you add a chapter? I was dumbfounded! (I listen to novels) 😢 😢 😢

It looks good, but the author actually drastically reduced the yandere concentration in the later stages, so there is only a slightly yandere plot in the front. Also, ask the author, is the ending a Hell End, a Happy End or a Bad End?