Beast Taming: Max Charm, Divine White Tiger Begs for a Contract

I've read 32 chapters while listening, and every fight scene takes forever to unfold. The beginning with the protagonist having a younger sister was fine, but then a fat best friend appeared. Is it true that they can't write without the fat guy? I think the sister might end up being given to the fat guy to sleep with. They've already mentioned our sister!

Too much rambling. A simple rescue scene took seven or eight chapters and still wasn't finished. The combat power was suppressed; the contracted white tiger was kept hidden. What's the point of deliberately portraying the protagonist as a pervert or a clown from the start? Besides, I think everyone clicked in for the attraction of the pet beasts; the interaction between the protagonist and the white tiger is minimal. I really can't stand it anymore.

Oh, ocean, you have so much water! Oh, earth, you are so desolate! This novel is utterly useless. I haven't gotten into any of the thirty-plus chapters, or rather, the content is completely unappealing, not exciting enough, the pacing is dragging, and I can't get any of the thrills. It's just one cliché after another.

I've read up to chapter 11 and they still haven't started the beast-taming contract! 🤦 They keep repeating the confession, it's been over ten chapters and they're still writing! I'm really fed up, it's just so frustrating. Ten chapters of such trivial stuff. And then it's the little sister and the fat guy again [Note] Can't they write without these two characters?

The premise is indeed quite novel, but what the audience wants to see is the interaction between the male protagonist and his beast tamers, not a diary entry where everything about daily life is written down. The detail needs to be appropriate, and I need to outline the later plot and think it through first, otherwise I won't be able to finish writing this book.

I have this déjà vu feeling about the scene where Zhao summons Second Master; it reminds me of some red-faced, white-masked ghost, saying, "You rascal, it's only been a short time, and you're already missing me again~~"

Don't focus on the protagonist's stats; just know that he's incredibly powerful. Don't get too caught up in the action; there's no real danger. Treat it as lighthearted comedy. The part where the protagonist says he doesn't want anyone to know about the contracted white tiger got a lot of flak, but it's still much better than those toxic novels.

I've never seen such a sloppy writer. He wrote twenty pages about a small incident and still wasn't finished; six or seven chapters have passed about a fight and it still hasn't started. What are you doing? So much nonsense! It's getting more and more annoying, I've had enough. Speechless.

The author writes about the protagonist not going all out, about the other side trying to steal the contracted monster, and about beating the contracted rabbit to the point of near death, but in the end, after dragging it out for so long, the damage is only slightly inflicted, without killing the monsters or crippling the group.

Having reached Chapter 10, and still not having signed a single beast tamer, what do you all think?