Villain System: Big Sister, You Came to the Wrong Door

It's very interesting. The male protagonist has very upright views. He is the savior in Butter comics. It's a pity that it was because of Shen He, otherwise this book would have been more exciting. I really miss the novel environment before Jingwang, now. . Well. Many women can't write at all. I don't think it's good to write about a single woman🙅‍♀️. I'm tired of looking for it. Finally, there was someone who could see it, but he was killed by Shen He again. Tears. To summarize, in Chapter 93, I ate Sister Qiandao, and on Ah Tong's birthday, I ate Ah Tong. There are currently only two on base completely. Those waiting for the plot include Qiandao Yin, the gangster eldest lady, the martial arts master, the class teacher and so on. Among them, due to Shen He's problem, the plot of the gangster lady was very baffling, and it was directly related to Wei Li's consciousness modification. [Cover face] Inexplicably, I like the interaction between A Tong and the male protagonist. I also prefer this kind of redemptive heroine. (However, the heroine's physical strength is too weak and needs to be strengthened.)

Coming from Huangmao next door, I feel that this book's emotional handling is a complete mess, and the character design is completely different. I hope this book will change, and I look forward to it [Like]

I think it's pretty good. The male protagonist always nips problems in the bud and solves hidden dangers in advance. It's much better than the other book, Huang Mao, in which the female protagonist was read all before the male protagonist came. As for the eunuch issue, I'm not in a hurry. In that book, it cost more than 200 yuan to get a kiss. Moreover, the relationship between the male and female protagonists in that book was the same as that in The Legend of Zhen Huan.

It looks good. I'll try to make it into a small animation [laughing]

It can be seen that the deletion is very serious, but there is nothing we can do about it. Tomato is like this. Come on, author. Watching Nishino Hitomi's birthday celebration was very touching. If you think about it carefully, you don't have to be sesame to satisfy people. You can write more emotional dramas, career dramas, profile descriptions, etc. Now if you want to go further, you can't limit it to the performance of the male protagonist. You can arrange some career lines for several female protagonists. If you want to expand the writing, you can even improve the world view. For example, give each of the heroines some skills. Nishino Hitomi likes to draw, so let him be a painter, create a good platform for him, buy her a computer, and let her grow and learn on her own. Speaking of good platforms, if the male protagonist has money, he can open a guild or company and bring in female protagonists, such as Wanshiwuwu, virtual anchor, etc., And the male protagonist is responsible for solving problems. Then the heroines can lay out all kinds of bright and hidden lines And Rinko, I asked her to be the housekeeper before, so I can let him try to manage the company's finances and grow and develop independently. In short, there is still a slight lack of character arcs and spirituality. Only Hitomi Nishino has a little bit of it, but it is very little. Of course, Shen He must be a big factor. You can understand it. It is still very interesting. If you look into the yellow comic world carefully, you can really write a lot of things.

I feel pretty good so far. Although I haven't turned around in the first 40 chapters and my mentality is a bit wordy, I finally understand it later. If the author doesn't write porn, he can write more emotional dramas, maybe it will become a sweet story [laughing]

The writing is pretty good. I like reading it. But the writing about the physical strengthening potion given by the system is a bit rubbish. After all, it's not the kind of urban superpower, so I can understand it. Secondly, I just want to complain about the people who have bad pronunciation in the comments. I want to say that you are sick. One moment, I say that this person is very annoying. The next moment, I say that she has no merit at all, and she is like a mascot. I said, how is she different from her sister? Are you sensible? It is normal for a person who has been in society to be more sensible than her sister. But have you ever thought that she also has advantages in this aspect? Isn't innocence an advantage? When did innocence become synonymous with stupidity and stupidity? Secondly, some people say that she always annoys the protagonist. Don't you have a sister? Or haven't you taken it in by reading the chicken-feather book? Didn't the protagonist keep bullying her first? Take a closer look. The protagonist thinks that she is stupid and cute, so he likes to bully her. Can you be a human being? When I go to school in the morning, I get kicked all the way. People don't stop going when the protagonist is not around. I just don't want to go, so I will go slower on the way, but I will still go. The protagonist must keep kicking her. I just went a little early. Secondly, some people say that she always complains. Isn't it normal? A family is having fun and then complains to the parents. They don't really want to do anything to the protagonist. If the protagonist disappears or disappears for a few days, she will be concerned and call her. It's just a little rude. But don't you have a sister? And let me say it again, if you really want to compare, the younger sister is better than the main heroine and her older sister. It's just that the protagonist likes to be more mature. But maturity and being single are both advantages. It's just that some like to be mature and some like to be innocent. Comparatively, they are both good-looking, so there is no way to compare them. Secondly, in terms of personality, one is lively, cheerful, cute and innocent, and the other is mature and gentle. They are all about the same. And the older sister is more tolerant of the protagonist, but the younger sister is not stingy, although sometimes she talks about how this is not good and that is not good. But when I hear that girls are pitiful, they will take care of others and let them participate in the big family. Do you want to take a look? Every time the protagonist brings a new person back, the younger sister does the hard work and cooks. And every time the protagonist beats the younger sister, is it really the younger sister's problem? Isn't it because the protagonist wants to do bad things and thinks the younger sister is in the way? So the younger sister either has an advantage, such as singing talent, or has less scenes later. You are all idiots, right? As a heroine, there is nothing to say about her current appearance. Adding a cute and innocent label, with kindness and a sense of justice. You are currently everyone's cook and you still despise me. Are you making a wish in the future? Good looks can't satisfy you, simple personality can't satisfy you, and full-level cooking skills can't satisfy you. In addition to eating, I won't compete with you for anything else. You're not satisfied. You want others to add more advantages or don't want it. Is there something wrong with you? It's not that I don't like the protagonist. It's just that it's hard to accept. It's too simple and hard to pick up. Those of you who are beeping come out to fight. Anyway, I don't feel that there are any bad problems with the female protagonists. On the contrary, there are problems with the male protagonists, but the problem is not big. Those who are not good at beeping should read the book again. How is she worse than the others?

I saw that there was talk about entering the dark room in the middle, but it was very quiet at that time, so I guess the wording was a bit obscene. When I got to the next level, I also entered a small dark room, so I wrote very cryptically. At present, there are more than 70 chapters, which is still relatively small, but the story framework has been established and you can read it. It is quite interesting. When I read this novel, it reminded me of a Japanese novel called "Sister's Kiss", probably because of the sense of betrayal emphasized throughout the novel. The ending can also adopt that pattern, which is quite thoughtful. Right now I'm just afraid that I'll run away halfway through writing.

Although it is a world of butter in the book, it was relatively disciplined at the beginning, but as soon as it started to take shape, he started to let himself go at 0 frames. It was too side-stage. It was really... It was... It really made me want to stop. It was great to watch this side-stage. Author, I know you are reading, go and update me!

Thoughts: The protagonist breaks into the gray world like a breath of fresh air, highlighting the evil around him and himself. Taste: Like chewing wax, not easy to swallow. Help: Stay away from the Imperial Palace and take care of yourself Recommendation: So! ! ! Don't do anything to others if you don't want to