I Accidentally Fell into a Tomb-Raiding World

This book, on the whole, the character setting and story framework are quite good. However, in the description of the character's behavior and the details of the story, I personally think there are certain deficiencies. Many details are not handled well. At the end of the story, instead of he, Yin Xu returned to his own world and separated from Xiaoguan. I think it is quite good. The whole story is like a tomb-robbing disaster in Yinxu. Most of it is the protagonist's experience, and then the main plot of the tomb-robbing. There are not many emotional descriptions, and even the relationship with the junior official is not described in clear words, which is the establishment of the couple's relationship (naturally) Ran Ran fell asleep, but there is no text explaining their relationship), and I have a feeling that this relationship is dispensable to Yin Xu and Xiao Guan. Sometimes I don't feel the love, but I can feel that Yin Xu treats Xiao Guan well, but is this a task or does it come from the heart? As for the junior officials, there is a kind of care and indifference to Yin Xu. It may be that they all have their own missions. It is even said that their missions are greater than their feelings. (When Yin Xu has one year left in the world of tomb robbers, he says goodbye to his friends more than he says goodbye to his junior officials. Moreover, in one year, there is very little interaction between the protagonist and his junior officials, mainly because there is very little description) After Yin Xu left, there was no description from the perspective of a small official, which was almost meaningless. The protagonist Yin Xu gave me an impression of being powerful but not powerful [face covering] Regarding his strength, I didn't see a specific description, so it's not easy to evaluate. Also, I felt like he had no temper. For example, in his first encounter with the black blind man, he was beaten by the black blind man later, tied up, stripped of his clothes, doused with hot water, and had his medicine stolen, but he was handled with care. Regarding the details of the story, the opening chapter mentioned the solution (medicinal materials) given by heaven and the meteorite that needs to be processed. During the writing process, the progress of finding the medicinal materials and meteorite processing was not seen. The official will still lose his memory and forget the protagonist. Yinxu was forgotten, and she cared but didn't care. She was relieved and handed over to Fatty Wuhe, but was taken to Banai without saying a word and trapped in an ancient building. Because Wuxie was injured, she said to Wu: Fortunately, I didn't kill you, what are you doing? There are also no detailed descriptions of the national background, Qingxi Pavilion, and the background of Yin Xu. In the world of tomb robbers, it involves supernatural ghosts, heavenly masters, and monsters. The description is a bit scattered. He has a national background. He is always provoked by the Huo family, and then the counterattacks are also emmmm. He can only talk about it. I have not seen where the Huo family has been counterattacked by the protagonist, and I have not seen the strength of the protagonist's background (no specific description)

It's pretty good, but the timing is a bit messy

Why! Why can't you take me away?

It felt okay. The protagonist didn't change the storyline too much. He just kept silently raising Zhang Qiling in his own territory. He didn't have a deep friendship with others. At the end, the memory was erased and he was separated.

Not bad, quite new, and the ending is a bit sad.

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Still pretty good

Not bad. Very pretty.

The novel is very good and worth recommending