Reborn: Starting by Teasing My Senior Sister Every Day

It looks good, I hope the author can finish it

It's very interesting. I read the first part and listened to the second part. I used to fall asleep while listening to the book. The plot of this book is very compact. I listened to it in one breath the night before and couldn't fall asleep at 2 a. M. [Face covering]

Although you are writing about the world of immortality where you and I are cheating, I don't think the villains you wrote are very smart. 😂😂

It looks okay so far When I first saw the names of the two female protagonists' constitutions, I thought they were some kind of furnace constitution (I really don't like this constitution), but luckily it's just the Yinzi constitution of the elixir of life.

To be honest, as a new author, he is already quite good. The theme and idea structure are actually very good. I just need to strengthen the details, the logic and the writing style. Come on＾0＾~

It's just not bad [laughs evilly] It's just a little short.

It's beautiful, that's really beautiful.

The plot is natural, the protagonist has almost no desire to be a bitch, and the character creation is also very good. I look forward to the protagonist taking down all the masters and sisters [laughing]

The author can read "Online Game: Legend of Shura" before writing. It may be helpful to you.

Not bad. It looks good. I love watching Emperor Uncle.