All-Star: Every Dream I Have Comes True

In my opinion, the female protagonist and all her men in this novel are merely "pawns." The white-faced man and the underworld figures are there to continuously supply the female protagonist with men for some kind of benefit. The female protagonist initially tries to accept this and contemplates suicide, but gradually compromises, even after experiencing various hardships, she has no room of her…

It's pretty good, a little bit angsty, can't it be a little sweet? Look at how many times the female lead has broken down, I'm worried I'll kill her off if I keep writing! 🤦

Well, how to put it... The beginning of this book says that the female protagonist chose suicide because she couldn't handle the endless stream of men following her. Actually, this is a normal thought process. In reality, even the most flirtatious person would break down knowing they had a dozen or more men. So this point is actually brilliant.

Is this supposed to compensate the female lead? Isn't it supposed to compensate the male leads? If I were the female lead, I'd just die! What does the underworld's mistake have to do with me? They even drove the female lead to the brink of collapse several times, and then there's that issue of changing her constitution. So who are they actually compensating?

It's really good, but I feel the female lead suffers a bit. It's nice that it's all sweet and adorable. I really don't like angst. There are many male leads, and I like them all. I stayed up all night reading it. The author needs to update more often; it's not enough. There are so few novels featuring older men. Do you have any other recommendations?

It's really good-looking, all middle-aged men, the middle-aged man circle is just so appealing.

Could you please reduce the screen time of Huang Zongze, Wu Zhuoxi, Zhang Yi, and Wang Kai? I've seen the latest chapter. Their scenes are too much and quite disjointed, sometimes so noisy it's driving me crazy. It feels like they're everywhere. It makes the other male leads seem like cameos, only occasionally appearing to say a few lines. Please add more scenes for Andy Lau and Leon Lai.

Hey author, don't be so biased! You give Chu Qing whatever she wants. Can't you give Xiao Tong some better food? There are so many handsome older men in H country! 🥺 Also, don't make her more and more childish. The more difficult a childhood is, the less likely she is to waste food or be picky about food. (Very loudly) Be nicer to Xiao Tong! 😢😢😢

There are only four All-Stars! There should be at least six or seven!

It's really good, I love this kind of story. Keep up the good work, author, don't stop updating!