Quick Transmigration: The Beautiful Cannon Fodder Gets a Harem-Lit Script

About my protagonist's name: It sounds great! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Rolls eyes] [Rolls eyes] [Rolls eyes] He's the nicest. Xie Ping Cup: Listen to a song today, and for the time being, drink a glass of wine to keep your spirits up Chu Yinwen: The cup is old and empty, and the music on the flute is recited. When I go to the countryside to read it, I feel like a dead person.

Very good The first two worlds are very beautiful. Think carefully about the third world and suddenly give you a big one! Starting at zero frame is the most sudden! Easter eggs are very sweet The last setting is very interesting, but there are two things that I don't think are very good: 1. The original person was treated like that, but the two protagonists just listened to the wall and expressed an irrelevant attitude. I really don't understand, even if it's Proton, even if I didn't see it, why is it still there? After the end, the protagonist falls down and collides. Really miserable, part of the game Second, the protagonist's psychological description refers to "your wife" many times, which feels very disrespectful and ignores the pain of others. That's not how active atmosphere works. It fluctuates around 15 to 25, no more than ten chapters. The author explained it, but I don't think it is convincing enough. Even if the two countries are hostile, this kind of physically and mentally unhealthy behavior cannot be stopped, but can we not watch it? Can't you just take it all with you? In the second world, if the protagonist is pitiful like this, what's the difference between his original feelings? It's okay not to stop it, but can you show humanitarian concern? It's already miserable, but you always use those three words to describe your psychology, adding fuel to the fire? Act within your ability, and don't try it if you don't have strong resistance. In the last few chapters, you can look at the causes and consequences and a better life. The ending is a happy ending, the cause and effect are clear, the scumbag is taken away, tortured and let go (the scumbag doesn't have much role, I really don't care to watch him), it ends perfectly, and the flowers are spread.

I can only say, it's so well written! ! Let me, a person who doesn't really read Kuaishuan Over 40 and may skip reading it, read it chapter by chapter. Teacher, your writing is so delicious! ! The writing is good, and I like the plot. It doesn't make readers look like fools! The writing logic is really good! ! Especially the character design of Shou, I just fell in love with it! ! ! I like this kind of character! ! Teacher, you are so good at writing! Living on the same earth as the teacher is already far ahead, thank you [blowing kiss] I really want to sell the school and spend money on you until you debut in C position! ! ! ! ! [Eat melon] All in all, I quite like this type of genre, and my IQ is on the line. I will keep following up, but I can only tell you, teacher, when you want to finish writing, I like to save the article (actually I have to go to school, so I can't catch up on reading) Hehe [sending heart] [sending heart]

It's so good, I like it very much. In fact, I wanted to quit halfway through, because I don't like seeing people hating Shou, but then I remembered that there is this kind of plot: Shou is hung up by the person he likes, but in fact, that person also likes Shou, but he just doesn't dare to say it. I was looking forward to this possibility, so I kept reading. Unexpectedly, it turned out to be true. The more I watched, the more I liked it.

It's very sweet. It's just that the plot has to lick those scumbags. It's a bit uncomfortable. I hope the pain can help the plot. Ahhhh. In short, it was really love at first sight.

It's really good-looking. I've seen a lot of quick-travel movies, but the author's background concept is very novel. When I read it for the first time, it turned out that it could still be like this. After reading the article, I guessed that maybe the cannon fodder who ran away in front of him was probably Xiaobai himself, but I didn't dare to think about how many times he would have to experience repeated worlds and wake up in despair again and again. I felt very worried every time when Tiandao read the file memory. This kind of ignorance experienced the despair of cannon fodder. Fortunately, Xiaobai met Lao Gong every time and successfully awakened to choose his own life instead of the life of cannon fodder. To be honest, after reading so many articles, the author's writing style is not particularly mature, and sometimes I always feel that it is a little lacking. In time, I also wrote my first book review. It doesn't matter, this little shortcoming is not surprising at all. I believe that the author will get better and better, and his writing style will also get better and better. I'm going to read another big article hahaha

It's so beautiful and awesome! The interaction between Xiaobai and Xie Pingbei is really sweet. It's just a bit sadistic in the early stage. I can only say that Chenxing deserves it. He doesn't know how to cherish the people in front of him and imposes his own pain on others. I'm really looking forward to the next plot [shy] I hope the author will update it soon~

Done in one day! I've watched this one the least, but the protagonists have gone through a lot before they can remember their lovers again. I think it's well written, and each one of them is a very full character. Although it is small, it is very refined. I think it is very good. Poor people must be hateful. This sentence can be said very vividly in it. You not only see this side of a character, but also other aspects of him. It doesn't always emphasize how much the protagonists love each other, but they accompany each other slowly and slowly. I finished reading it without even paying attention. It's a very good article. You can read it ୧⍢⃝୨

I'm twice as happy, relieved of stress, and finally found the right book. It's like a little theater, very beautiful, like a hook, unforgettable, but the author is great, please update it quickly, there are too few, I want a second world!

I feel that the best story is the first one in the small world. The rest are just so-so. I just didn't expect it to end so quickly [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes] (Purely personal opinion, no malice intended)