I Created Pokemon in the Hokage World

Give myself a good review, hehe 💕

The combination of Naruto and Pokémon is quite interesting, but the plot seems to be moving too fast. It feels like I'm reading a synopsis, where a single sentence covers the events of several chapters.

The style is nice, I quite enjoy reading it. Keep it up, posting dozens of chapters a day would be great. 😏 Looks like the author's book is doing well. 😏 More people are liking and commenting on my posts.

I think this is alright; at least I didn't see too many problems. It's just that in some places, did the author really run out of names? Some characters were simply retranslated and replaced with other names. 🤦🤦🤦🤦 Also, this feels a bit like a harem trend, but I still think writing harems is fine, but don't just keep writing harems all the time.

It's good, this novel is great, I hope it doesn't fall apart.

Writing a novel is not like writing an essay. When describing things, avoid using specific numbers—whether it's time, size, or weight. Let the reader imagine the details.

It's pretty good, quite interesting. However, the combat power seems to be developing a bit too quickly right now; let's see how the author writes it.

Having seen enough of Konoha, let's check out Sunagakure. The fusion of Pokémon and Naruto is pretty good; I'd recommend it.

The content is not bad, but the details of the battles are not well described.

This book is very good. The protagonist is a transmigrator who travels to the Naruto world and becomes Rasa. Compared to other books (almost all of which feature protagonists from Konoha), this book is quite novel.