Bloodriver of the Wizarding World

Great! Finally, I've found a genuine wizarding novel. It focuses on research and creation without any messy plot twists. Keep it up!

A very good wizarding novel, with many small details handled exceptionally well! The protagonist's personality is also very well portrayed, possessing a quiet madness. It's a traditional wizarding research novel focusing on the obsessive growth of a researcher; I hope it doesn't fall apart.

It's a very good wizarding novel, but the time jumps are too frequent. It would be better to jump around in a concentrated period, then summarize and plunder some resources before jumping again. Jumping every three to five pages is a bit too much.

That's great, keep it up! ✊

It's well-written, but it only mentions one entirely new particle, and the author uses the blood example even in the intermediate apprentice stage. This is the wizarding world, after all. Just use the well-known dark examples from the academy. Wait until you become a wizard and have your own territory. Then we'll see.

It's a good read, though. Many of Tomato's wizard novels are just a sham.

Keep the current pace

A decent wizarding novel

The writing is acceptable, but there are many errors in his data.

Sure, but is this the end?