Fortune-Telling Livestream: From the Start, It’s a Case of Real and Fake Heiresses

It's quite interesting and contains a lot of metaphysical events that people are interested in.

Too many typos

It's beautiful, the plot is attractive, I can't stop watching it

There are too many typos and missing words, which is really not good. There are also broken sentences. Are punctuation marks worthless anymore? It is abused everywhere, and the proper headlines are just for the title. It turns out that most of them are metaphysical fortune tellers. The introduction and title are both sweet articles + slap in the face (less). It turns out that they are mainly written by metaphysics live broadcast fortune tellers. They are completely deceived.

The punctuation marks are all messed up, and typos are everywhere. It looks so tiring. I saw comments saying that there would be no male protagonist in the middle and later stages, so I decisively gave up. The content is good, but it's hampered by typos and random punctuation.

The three views of this book are super upright. There is no such thing as a wife-killing sermon or any nonsense. The heroine is a dodder flower at first, but I think the first thing to do when entering a strange environment is to stand firm and adapt, so the heroine is not wrong to use the existing conditions to create better conditions. This is my personal opinion. If you don't like it, please don't comment.

Can the author break up the sentences well? It affects my reading, and you missed too many words, right?

Can the author check when he publishes the article? Sometimes the context is not connected, and sometimes the plot is so meaningless that it makes my head full of blood. ? ? ? , And my male protagonist, don't just write about live fortune-telling. How can it be a romance novel if the male and female protagonists don't interact?

I have read more than a hundred chapters [Eating Melon]. The plot is okay and I have the motivation to continue to follow [I learned it]. But some plots and dialogues are really messy. There are typos and sentences that don't make sense. I'm typing names all over the place. I feel dizzy while reading. I keep skipping and skipping to the normal part. Originally, the opponent scene is the highlight part and I can't even see the plot [awkward laugh]. It's very tiring to watch.

The story is still very interesting, but there are too many typos and omitted words. It would be better if the details are dealt with. Isn't the title of the book Marrying My Fiancé and My Adoptive Father? There are basically no male protagonists in the middle and later stages, and the emphasis is entirely on the supernatural aspect, which feels off topic [laughing and crying] The rating of 7.9 Is a bit low, 8.1 Is more appropriate.