I Redeem Our Ancestors Among the Stars

I read the reviews before reading the book, so my expectations for this book may be a bit high. After reading it, I was a little disappointed with the author's writing skills. However, among the novels Tomato has read so far, this one is considered good. The overall logic and narrative are clear. The protagonists and supporting characters are all established, and there are no flaws. It is recommended to go a little deeper in attracting readers' interest in reading and add some cool points. One more thing I want to complain about is that the characters in the article discuss the order of the country and the idea of ​​communism. The dialogue has no depth and cannot attract resonance. The relatively bland dialogue makes reading less interesting. It has a feeling of talking on paper and discussing high-level points, but lacking spiritual substance.

Nice! The settings in it can be rounded off. Many interstellar settings that require money are self-contradictory. In some novels, the interstellar empire humiliates an admiral who has made great contributions and even sends him to a brothel. After the admiral came out, he just wanted to change his prince and continue to be loyal. I was convinced by this setting. There are also some writings about Jun. In the end, the main constitutional system directly turned into a feudal monarchy because the parliament and other things were abolished, which was a historical regression. Some people directly wrote about interstellar feudal monarchy, but at one time they wrote about how everyone worshiped the royal family, and at another time they wrote about how everyone disapproved of the royal family. I was also convinced that they were all the same interstellar netizens, so this shouldn't be like this.

I know my wife reads every comment, so I'm commenting again! Madam, please look at me! ! ! ! I really like this book, but it seems that the results of this book are not good, and I am worried that my wife will give up, so I will write more and hope you will read it. I really, really like this book. I used to use other software to read novels. I recently searched for it on Tomato for a few days and this is my favorite. The plot is very interesting. It does not stick to the traditional plot of fighting between real and fake daughters. The world constructed is also very unique. The advanced and backward future era is clearly portrayed. Judging from the current plot, the main line in the future should be the struggle of the three legions. I hope my wife won't give up because of some bad comments. Everyone is attracted to their own eyes. Anyway, I like it very much. Be sure to finish writing it! Come on! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I like the heroine's character very much, she is perseverant and full of vitality. I give you a lot of support from the author.

At first I thought it was a story about a real and fake daughter in an interstellar shell. After reading it, I found out that it is a wonderful group portrait novel, and the heroine and the original heroine also get along well. In it, girls help girls, and every female character is well portrayed, even the one whose family is in trouble. The psychological transformation of the female protagonist is also well described, from being framed and jealous of the heroine at the beginning to later being grateful to the heroine for saving her and acknowledging her excellence. Of course, there are other characters who are also very good, such as Er Gou, Jiang Jingrui, Xie Jiangting, Yan Hui, etc. They are all very good. Those who like group portraits can read this. Here is a small suggestion, I hope the author will not stop updating, hahaha [Sending my heart] (I have been following this book since the serialization started, but there was a period in the middle where the author stopped updating for too long, so I put it on the bookshelf. I accidentally found out that it was finished today. When I saw the heroine and the others being released by Zhang Shaoshuai, I always wanted to know if there is any Escape, I read it today and it has a happy ending, I like it very much), and the author has brought the highlight moments of the war where the heroine and the others overthrew the empire in one go. It is not enjoyable, but overall it is still very good. Finally, I would like to thank the author for presenting such a wonderful book to us. Come on, I wish the author better and better.

If I also write novels, the general idea of ​​my first novel should be the same. Fight for ideals, expose the injustice and violence in the world, and finally have a happy ending.

"What her experience of walking out of the mountains taught her is that the more difficult you are in, the more you need to understand yourself clearly and deal with problems calmly. The starting point given by your parents is just a starting point. Whether you have something or not is indeed important, but it is not the decisive factor in who you can become." "I will, just today, tell him and tell everyone that even the little trash who walked out of the garbage planet 3576 has a chance to stand here." "People can't make progress in sugar-coated bullets. I must keep myself in a fighting state and have thoughts at all times. These things cannot be given by past glory." "The death of the tribe and the destruction of the species are irreconcilable. The great thing is that even children know this. Sadly, it even takes a child to know this. " "There are 25 billion men in the world. There are many men, but there is only one me."

I think the author's writing is very good. Why are so few people reading it? From the current point of view, the development of the story is relatively stable. The heroine is not very strong at the beginning. She is at two extremes, S in mental strength and F in physique [laughing and crying]. However, the heroine silently worked hard when she was looked down upon by others and improved her physical level. He came up and became the top pick in the mecha department during the college entrance examination. He amazed everyone. He was very calm and brainless in everything he did. Moreover, there were very novel colors in this book. As for the heroic spirit, it seems pretty good so far. It can be regarded as a golden finger, but the heroine needs to work hard to get it. The only thing that makes me speechless is that her mother has such a strong background, but she ended up marrying such a stupid person. . . . I felt like there must be a reason, but now it seems, I really do. . . I hope the author can quickly develop the plot

It's good-looking, with a step-by-step plot and clear logic. The heroine is not very strong at the beginning, but slowly grows in all aspects. The heroine's goal changes little by little, and she always follows the goal.

Nice to read [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] I rarely see novels connecting historical figures with systematic texts (Diaijia, maybe I don't read enough?). And Shen Hui's (or rather Ning Weiqing's) path to becoming stronger in the early stages really doesn't make me feel cliche. Before I clicked on it, I thought it was another old-fashioned system upgrade flow (I didn't say it was bad, I just read too much and wanted to find novel articles). Thinking back to the previous experiences, especially the Ergou episode, I really [almost cried] and look forward to the next development, come on, madam [shy][shy]